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Circle to Love
by Sara Coslett
Saturday, October 04, 2008
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Mornings fill me with precise dreams

Of romance morphing into love.

Everyday I hear the same song

Modified by different keys.

Dreams rehearse what minds require

Wearing out the path to loves needs.

Doors are opened and then slammed shut!

And tears a token of mistrust.

Salty cheeks, brush aside what could

Be; dreams that are reality

And not dramatic exercise.

Progress moves along the circle

To end where it always began—

With unfulfilled mourning, for dreams.

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Reviewed by Anthony Nerone	11/21/2009

Dear Sara, I have not read a single line of yours in 6 years. Yet I still read the sadness as was a long time ago. As always everything is well written. I have a feeling you will be happy again. GOD Bless Tony




Reviewed by Regis Auffray	11/15/2009

I am drawn into the "mood" to which your verses have given birth, Sara. Truly compelling poetry. Thank you. Love and best wishes, Regis




Reviewed by Bill Broome	10/26/2008

Your words take us in a sad circle, and we cry with you. This line is truly classic, "... unfulfilled mourning for dreams." You continue to be so deeply capable in this mode. - Bill




Reviewed by Elizabeth Price	10/6/2008

Excellent play on words and excellent write. I feel you futility. Keep on Keeping on. Liz




Reviewed by Charlie	10/6/2008

The last 5 lines reached out and spoke to me loudly. Come on, Char, expand those dream muscels! --Charlie




Reviewed by John Flanagan	10/5/2008

Sara, a well-focused theme here and you write with accuracy and the required precision for this. I like it very much. John




Reviewed by Felix Perry	10/5/2008

Yearning and sadness predominate this heart touching write that leaves the reader pausing to reread again... Fee




Reviewed by jude forese	10/5/2008

"dreams that are reality And not dramatic exercise" indeed dreams of the heart, that are most meaningful to us, are those that eventually become real ...




Reviewed by m j hollingshead	10/5/2008

well said




Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner	10/4/2008

Sara, That photo, and this write, is exquisite. Well done - (((HUGS))) and love, Karla.




Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU	10/4/2008

Emotions not fulfilled in "Circle to Love", and grace blinks its light to another moment... Love is not accepted in pure essence... reasoning is the point... Doubt in loving flows. Great composition of love and dreams. I salute You, Poet. Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

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