New Breed
by
Sara Coslett
Tuesday, May 26, 2009
Rated "G" by the Author.
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This poem was written by a friend who asked me to post it anonymously for him.
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"NEW BREED"
Pants around the knees, ass visible, dirty underpants, open shoe laces.
Cap skew on, floppy walk style, hole in clothes aint matter.
Geniuses in sex, crack, criminality, coolness bogwash, can you build a fridge, bridge or a space shuttle?
Sit at table no manner just leave food fork and knife some how, maybe stuff a burger in face and say yeah cool ey.
Civilisation took 4 billion years to get where it was, now yeah cool ey and floppy walk?
Merkama whoever I dont care, Afghanistan is their invention to encourage floppy walk and dirty restrooms.
We need a cleanup, education, manners and excellent products.
Away with the pushers on the stock exchange, railway station and police force.
Tax collector, you go collect at floppy, and dont punish the hard-working.
Ambassadors of our daily lives are criminals and no-good unemployment scammers.
Jahve, Jesus, Buddha and you know em puts food on tables of families of hardworking men.
Some of them carry bombs.
You dont see anything cock-eyed yet?
Come on, lets fix it and get the job moving.
NOW!
© 2009 by Nobody Clinical
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| Reviewed by Bill Broome |
5/30/2009 |
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| A disturbing write, well conceived and keenly written. |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
5/28/2009 |
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Thank the anonymously poet for sharing this poem as it express the true realities of today's youth and what is going on in this world.take care
EDWIN |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
5/27/2009 |
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Yea I think you are quite right, time normal people who work hard get the breaks...
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| Reviewed by L. Figgins |
5/26/2009 |
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"Nobody Clinical" has his finger on the right vein here. "Civilization took 4 billion years to get where it was...". A very rapid decline in the last sixty. Hoping for the renaissance after the darkness. Great write...
Lin |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
5/26/2009 |
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| great. Liz |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
5/26/2009 |
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Your friend has a very keen sense of the realities of what is going on and why....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
5/26/2009 |
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Sara,
Kudos to the anonymous poet.
John |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
5/26/2009 |
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A big hand for your friend, Sara.
Love the way he writes and what he writes.
-gene. |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
5/26/2009 |
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HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!
Got to love his style..clinical or not..fine engineering work/write :)!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
5/26/2009 |
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Sara,
This one is no holds barred - many different emotions come to mind reading these lines. I fear for our children, for our future - powerfully penned excellence. Tell your friend he (?) done good.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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