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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
9/17/2009 |
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Wonderful ku! Amazing how much was said in so few words! I love this style of poetry. There's another fabulous ku writer in the den...Lori Moore....if you haven't already, you should check out her work..I think you'll love it!
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
7/20/2009 |
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Doesn't get better than this, Sara - wow. So much packed into few words - perfect.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
7/10/2009 |
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| succinct powerful ambiance, Sara ... |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
7/4/2009 |
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| such a well expressed bit of emotion-i could feel the heaviness! |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
7/1/2009 |
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this speaks to me of inner sadness.....
when we are engulfed in a depressed situation not of our own choosing.. or making....sometimes the world just sucks........
good write :) |
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| Reviewed by Bill Broome |
7/1/2009 |
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Well said ... in a few lines. May the situation turn to bright and cheerfull joy... in time, Thank you for sharing this with me.
- Bill |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
7/1/2009 |
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But, Sara, in Scarlet's words...tomorrow is another day.
-gene. |
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| Reviewed by L. Figgins |
7/1/2009 |
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Concentrated sorrow and a powerful last line. Great Ku...
Lin |
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
7/1/2009 |
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superb!
Cryssa |
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| Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary |
7/1/2009 |
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| Concise and powerful! 'Nuff said. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
7/1/2009 |
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Striking ku Sara and one that plants a firm image deep in the mind and heart.
hugs
Fee |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
7/1/2009 |
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Your poem speaks loudly with your words and emotions,thank you for sharing,take care
EDWIN |
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| Reviewed by T. S. |
7/1/2009 |
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My dear friend, but for clouds in your eyes; the sun failed to rise
But rise it did today,just as it always has and always will.
The sunshine and light you seek is not to be found even on the fairest of days, but rather it can be found in the heart, where your Joy has retreated for protection from its constant overexposure. You give joy with every kind act you preform,and with every smile you so freely provide to all who know you, and yet the one thing you are missing in your life is a true love of your very own. You search for this love in the morning sun, when perhaps the lover you seek can be found standing in an evening rain... |
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| Reviewed by Linda Hill |
7/1/2009 |
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Sarah,
May your tears turn to joy. God bless..
Blessings,
~Linda |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
7/1/2009 |
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| ...WEEPING MAY ENDURE FOR A NIGHT...BUT JOY COMES IN THE MORNING. THE SON HAS RISEN...NOW IT IS TIME TO CLIMB OUT OF THAT PIT AND LET 'HIM' SHINE 'HIS' STRENGTH ON YOU. THIS IS A WONDERFUL, SOUL BEARING WORK WITH LITTLE WORDS BUT GREAT EMOTION. GOD BLESS AND THANKS FOR SHARING. JOYCE |
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