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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
9/17/2009 |
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All of this from one word! An absolutely beautiful write, Sara! Loved it!
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
8/26/2009 |
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I like what you did with this word...it is a favorite of mine as well...
I especially like the second stanza.
Cryssa :~) |
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| Reviewed by Roger Wayne Eberle |
8/13/2009 |
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| I love that word, too... and like what you've done to pull out its nuance. Nice poem. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
8/12/2009 |
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Looking deep into one's soul and blossoming with truth...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
8/11/2009 |
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sometimes being lost in ubiquity allows us to find more of ourselves ...
very well developed thought and finely tuned poetic application of its implications ... |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
8/11/2009 |
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Sara,
You make a simple moment of inspiration so telling and meaningful, and convey the essentials of experience all of us can relate to directly.
John |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
8/11/2009 |
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...TRYING HARD TO REACH ANOTHER...BUT LOSING YOURSELF IN THE PROCESS. WELL WRITTEN. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
8/11/2009 |
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So much in so few lines, Sara.
I know this dream well...racing here and there and everywhere,
lost and searching for I know not what.
-gene. |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
8/11/2009 |
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| "Touching the universe with my everything" is a great line. Enjoyed. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
8/11/2009 |
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Very nicely done and a special thanks to Karla for helping me with the word itsefl. You do these poems sooo well. Thank you for sharing video and poem.
hugs
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
8/10/2009 |
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Ubiquitous: adjective. Omniscient; everywhere at once. Sara, this is a powerpacked little number - took matters into your own hands, I see. =] What I got, reading these lines - am I even close? Well done, in any event, enjoyed this one.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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