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| Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) |
3/8/2003 |
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| One always loves more than the other, the ol' when two forces of equal mass meet trick. |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
3/8/2003 |
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Oh!! Hey !!on which side of that boat ae you sitting??
Seems to me we are sailing the same sinking damn boat here....ggggrrr ...this is soooo sad Super Girl....I know this feeling all tooooo well.... I will do the praying part Okay!!!
God Bless all those thats sailing the same old love boat....Take care
Much,Much Warm Love
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| Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy |
3/7/2003 |
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I have seen you lie
To me
To your family
To your friends
Time to cut and run, Super Girl! He even lies to himself, don't you. Excellent write, you nailed it, a liar is a liar is a liar. |
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
3/7/2003 |
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3-07-03
We Live In a World Of People who Lie About Anything Esp.To Those Who Love Them Most__It's Time To Look to Higher Realms,Go, Walk Away, And, Never, Do Not Look Back...
I'd Rather Be Alone Than With Anywhere Near a Liar,i.e. even My Own Son Who Has Lied Since Day He Was Born...
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
3/7/2003 |
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Well expressed, SuperGirl.
And the answer is...it was never meant to be.
~E |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
3/7/2003 |
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| choices must be made... |
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| Reviewed by Sally Odgers |
3/7/2003 |
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On the other hand... maybe the character in your poem is clever enough *not* to love a liar?
Sally O. |
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| Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) |
3/7/2003 |
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| Why indeed! Love can truly be pleasure or pain...A fine line is right! Excellent, moving write...Ty, Dani |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
3/7/2003 |
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Supergirl,
Excellent "Why can’t you stop playing mind games
Why can’t you love me like I love you "
Always the mind games I love this one.
And the repetition at the start of verses.
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| Reviewed by Kelie Urbanec |
3/7/2003 |
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I have had the same experience too. I wrote a poem about it too. It is really hard to deal with someone who lies all the time. I wish I meet a guy that I can trust and I hope that you do too. You deserve it. Great poem. It is the only way to let true feelings out in the open.
With Love
~Kelie~ |
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