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by Lonnie Hicks
Sunday, January 31, 2010
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Part of the "PP&L in the Obama Age" book.


Step lightly here;

Words below:

Adverbs too.

 

Be ginger with the Sentences;

Note: the Clauses have so much Ego.

Oh, let's not talk Punctuation,

the pickiness makes for unrelating.

I have had a personal thing about

the Pluperfect Tense,

before I learned to get it right-

I think.

Now, I do like the Action Verbs

they stand out.

But the Hyperbolic Adjectives are overused,

don't you think?

The pronouns are the worse.

Especially the 'I'

IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII

They even look like prison bars,

so limiting for me..

The 'G' is great.

Looks friendly; rather like it's waving.

Well, you get the idea.

 

Have to go you know

Here comes Mr. Period.

He is so rigid.

He thinks everything

begins and ends

with him. 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


Lonnie Hicks


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Reviewed by John Coppolella 3/15/2013
I I I love it, Lonnie Hicks. Period.
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 6/27/2011
Cleverly expressed and evocative of thought; thank you for sharing, Lonnie. Love and peace to you,

Regis

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The Gospel According to Lilith: Fantasy (10) free audio chapters) & Videos

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Love: Its Wonderments, Sufferings and Consumations (Free Audio Samples-41)

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Letters From the Earth: Faint Hopes and Lamentations

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Politics, Poetry and Love in the Obama Age

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The Obama Chronicles: Stories From the Heartland

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Einstein, Religion, Politics and Literature-461 pps

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