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Knots
by Lonnie Hicks
Tuesday, June 14, 2011
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A Love Story note: read this piece two ways-1-a double negative equals a positive or a successful love story or treat the double negative as a negative. The reader has to make up their own mind as to how she/he will read it.

She was my lady

not;

She was my friend

not;

I reached out to her,

she reached out to me

not, not;

she wasn't interested in me

not, not;

My roommate and she

were seeing each other

not not, not, not

My stomach

knots.

Time to move on I said to my self

The room mate and she
broke up

not not;

My heart all tied up in knots

spoke to her after a time
to see if she was interested in me
not, not,

And she was
not, not,

And we

are still
not not
without any knots.

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Reviewed by Patrick Granfors	6/14/2011

Knot meant to be. Patrick




Reviewed by Christine Tsen	6/14/2011

Full of affectionate and adorable wit, but with just a hint of sadness! Chris




Reviewed by Annabel Sheila	6/14/2011

Glad to see she didn't take away your sense of humor...this is soooo cute, Lonnie! giggle... Anna