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  Knots
by Lonnie Hicks
Tuesday, June 14, 2011
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A Love Story note: read this piece two ways-1-a double negative equals a positive or a successful love story or treat the double negative as a negative. The reader has to make up their own mind as to how she/he will read it.


She was my lady

not; 
 
She was my friend
not; 
 
I reached out to her, 
she reached out to me
not, not; 
 
she wasn't interested in me
not, not; 
 
My roommate and she
were seeing each other
not not, not, not
 
My stomach
knots.
 
Time to move on I said to my self

The room mate and she
broke up
not not; 

My heart all tied up in knots

spoke to her after a time
to see if she was interested in me
not, not,

And she was
not, not,

And we

are still
not not
without any knots.
 
 
 
 

 

   


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Reviewed by Patrick Granfors 6/14/2011
Knot meant to be. Patrick
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 6/14/2011
Full of affectionate and adorable wit, but with just a hint of sadness!
Chris
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 6/14/2011
Glad to see she didn't take away your sense of humor...this is soooo cute, Lonnie! giggle...

Anna
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