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  Our World
by Lonnie Hicks
Thursday, July 28, 2011
Rated "G" by the Author.

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The humming bird stood still

raising it's wings waiting.

I drew my breath

and gave a gentle breeze


and noticing
it flew away
bouyed by that gentle wind.

A ripple from a dropped leaf

lands gently on the pond

and sweet waves



making tiny circles

to the center round..

I touch a single rose

and hear it purr.

Drawing my breath

I exhale

deep into your lungs;

where mix

all things

between us.

All life is touch

and breaths offered.

All life

is gentle given

or badly rough.


All life is mixed

between the us

and the not us.


These exchanges

make up

what we know

as the World.

Be a gentle breather

not the badly rough.

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Reviewed by Odin Roark 5/19/2012
The "gentle breather" as I noted in a previous review, you have a gentle style,limpid without sentimentality. And... you have a handle on the answer: "All life is mixed between the us and the not us." Rich.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart 5/4/2012
Exquisite poem Lonnie.
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 7/30/2011
Be a gentle breather
not the badly rough.

Great counsel to bring peace and harmony, Lonnie. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Reviewed by Donna Chandler 7/29/2011
Be a gentle breather ...... what a beautiful thought. I like that idea a lot!

Reviewed by John Flanagan 7/28/2011
The final lines stir me, Lonnie,
and i'd love to follow their positive message
and indeed the point of view of the whole work.
The writing is delicate but not frail, in-touch,
not cold and are connected and aware.

Reviewed by Christine Tsen 7/28/2011
This is truly amazing, like shelter for the soul of the reader.
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 7/28/2011
This flows beautifully, with a sting of a good message..great work!
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