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So Few Hearts Intact
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I long for the longing of you
therefore, I will not reach out
to call.
I miss you but not enough
to make myself move.
Your kiss fits my lips-
no others do-
and
I'll not allow another's mouth
on mine, this space is hollowed.
I have had my heart cut in two
and hoped from this happiness.
I know this is only a dream
a broken heart in two
must mean
two thoughts:
Go or Stay;
Love
and/or
Love's Remains.
How many hearts in view
still intact
after Love's
been through?
Not many I'd surmize
but all would still conclude
it was and is
still
worth the ride.
My conclusion:
a broken heart
is better to have
than one
intact
and yet unused.
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
5/4/2012 |
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| Yes worth it, stunning poem. |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
9/2/2011 |
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Amen! Your conclusion is right on the money!! WEll done, Lonnie!
Anna |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
9/1/2011 |
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The title is tremendous:
break into and break in two..
breaching the stockade and entering
love and then the heartbreak
of rejection or loss..it's all here, Lonnie,
and it's very fine indeed.
Yes!
John |
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| Reviewed by Janna Hill |
9/1/2011 |
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It seems the love of the conundrum is as much as for the person... But I agree it is better than a heart unused.
An excellent write Lonnie.
Janna |
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