|Reviewed by Axilea MU
|As I was reading this poem, I increasingly felt as if I... did not want to disturb their intimate moments. Effective.
|Reviewed by Paul Judges
|A delightful poem, Lonnie|
|Reviewed by J Howard
|to love...is the path finding oneself and know ..you are and always have been on the right path...to self discovery...and awareness..|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|It is as though you have been "reading" my life for the past seven months, Lonnie. I am happy to state that I can relate. Thank you for sharing this most meaningful offering. Love and peace,
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|Very sensual and very revealing journey of two soul mates. Patrick|
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Profoundly beautiful about something so precious.
|Reviewed by Janna Hill
|ooh la la Lonnie. This makes me want to dig out the old photo albums and see "Picasso like..."
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|This was so soft and warm it made me feel "ahhhhh"....very lovely phrasing, Lonnie! Well done!