|Reviewed by Vesper Darby
|what a sensuous dance you took us through lonnie...a romantic glimpse of what those of us without enforced boundaries yearn for...an insightful beautifully worded piece for sure...pat|
|Reviewed by J Howard
|oh! i so loved this piece. how lovely. i saw her and loved her too. beautiful piece-so glad you shared.
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|A wonderful characterization Lonnie. To have no boundary at all must bring such a feeling of being lost. Well penned as always.|
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|This is so melodic, and with a fascinating perspective.
I hope you are well, and enjoying summer's blooms!
|Reviewed by Asa Seeley
|When one finds the right 'container'...they know. well done. thank you.
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Sometimes when we crossover, we find riches far beyond what we sought, when we find love. Beautiful.
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Wow! This leaves one breathless....Beautifully and sensually penned, Lonnie....great phrasing!
|Reviewed by Keith Rowley
|Interesting: you have framed the female as the gushing force to be contained and the male as the containing discipline. In Kabbalah, we say the first aspect of duality is Chockmah, the male force, bursting forth without discipline. This force is contained by Binah, the female force of severity.
But of course, all things are mirrored at the various levels of existence.