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Silver Heart and Moonlight
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She had the moon in her hair
I'm sure its beams played there
because they loved her too
transforming their own grey light
indeed
transforming light itself
from that smile of hers
into noon at midnight.
She sat there in moon-white
her dress a sliver-white
asking if I had a girl friend
her voice parting the Carolina night
and I reply
"No, not now..."
"You and she..."
her voice trailed off
and I could only let
silence
invade that space
flummoxed
by that question
unable to speak
because what I wanted to say
was that I loved her
but could not;
she too embraced that silence
judging
she had been forward
taking my silence for embarrassment
or worse
lack of interest
retreating then behind
that silent shroud
we all sometimes
draw over ourselves
when emotions are in doubt.
Her father called then
and I rose
to leave for college
that very next day
never seeing
her again.
Opportunities
its seems
become real
only when
we are prepared to leap
into the moonlight
dark
and embrace
silver hearts
at their beating
offering
call.
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| Reviewed by pat medlin |
10/22/2012 |
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so gentle, such silvery gliding words of wistful remembering...i could feel each nuance of emotions.
how i would love to hear Garrison Keillor's rendition of reciting this wonderful work |
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| Reviewed by J Howard |
9/7/2012 |
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When we "cannot" speak, our heart does. Lovely sentiment and beautifully written.
thank you for sharing- |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
8/23/2012 |
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Beautifully penned, Lonnie! Guess we all have "what if" moments to reflect upon...lovely phrasing.
Anna |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
8/22/2012 |
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| My goodness Lonnie, this is gorgeous and very emotive. |
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| Reviewed by Janna Hill |
8/22/2012 |
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Lovely writing Lonnie bringing to life not only past memories but giving 'flummoxed' a place to call home.
:) Janna |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
8/21/2012 |
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A beautiful remembrance, beautifully expressed. I too had those moments, those opportunities to connect that somehow, it didn't happen.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
8/21/2012 |
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| Marvelous emotion in this, and gentle and resonant ~ |
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| Reviewed by Odin Roark |
8/21/2012 |
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| You've penned a gentle and poignant chapter of life. The sense of melancholy's insistence is only upstaged by the fine sense of humble understanding. Well done. |
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