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The Fly and The Spider
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Lillian Sara Cauldwell
Tuesday, November 11, 2003
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A spider stalking a fly on an ice flow.
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The Fly and The Spider
spiders
skate
useless
legs
collapse beneath.
hairy
legs
spread asunder
slipping
ice
flows beneath.
the
fly
inches
forward
as its prey
slips
slides
with
no release.
as
the
spider
sits
and waits.
as
the
fly
contemplates
his death.
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
7/25/2009 |
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| Ver interesting poetry. |
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| Reviewed by ya mama (Reader) |
11/11/2003 |
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| nice poem and the skeltonic form works well with the poem |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
11/11/2003 |
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| Interesting write....so well written....food for the brain....BHUWAN |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg |
11/11/2003 |
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This is well written and i like the wordage and intese feel then the end.
Peg |
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| Reviewed by James Pajot |
11/11/2003 |
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| Interesting piece. Dark and moody...as I am sure it was intended. Very subtle but effective imagery. |
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