|Reviewed by Melinda
|It is a bit depressing.
but all the same it is a really great pome .
Well done Ben
|Reviewed by biz
|Another great poem Ben. Its a bit depressing but still really good.|
|Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
|Very very ....oooh sad. Teresa|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Depressing as hell, but well written. [smiles] Bravo. It is also thoughtful.
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Ben...excellent write...clap clap clap....BHUWAN|
|Reviewed by Erica Ivory
|Wow.. Ben this is a powerful message of these confused times.. Excellent write that mirrors my own feelings in many ways..
As you are my father..
How do you feel?
Your son is now a martyr.