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| Reviewed by Tami Ryan |
7/28/2004 |
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| A painful, emotive write, Ben. Good work. |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
5/3/2003 |
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Ben, great work
'eternally damned
existence revived
to serve a life
a captured heart
and reverting back to
a horrifying start
it starts at end
and ends in fear
but I see now
you were never near "
Peggy |
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| Reviewed by james |
5/3/2003 |
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| Very interesting poem.Intriging.Original.Different.I see huge potential here. |
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| Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader) |
5/3/2003 |
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It seems we can miss so much, what was never there in the first place. Hope can be a bitter prism to look through.
Nicely written, Ben.
-James |
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| Reviewed by Jeremy de Laroche (Reader) |
5/3/2003 |
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Great Ben!
always great work from you! i am very proud of you!! |
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