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| Reviewed by Z McClure |
9/2/2012 |
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I've been there many times, and this expresses that unfortunate experience very well. The ending is hopeful, and comforting to anyone passing through that place though! Very good poem, Donna.
Zach |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo |
9/27/2011 |
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| Having recently lost my father, I understand this well. Sadly, everyone will go through this grief and will come to understand it first-hand, the loss of someone you love hurts to the very core and nothing can change it. But there is hope when there is caring. Emotional piece. ~Best, Elizabeth |
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| Reviewed by Linda Hill |
9/27/2011 |
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Donna,
AMEN to this preceptive poem. Most of us have been there, I have many times. God has always got me through all my trials, Donna.
Many blessings,
~Linda |
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| Reviewed by dan Rosenhagen |
9/2/2011 |
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| Beautiful Donna, The halls of grief are long and made of the hardest stone. Unknownto he who is the griever, as is a great wound, 'tis the place from where our healing starts. |
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| Reviewed by Chip Bergeron |
8/31/2011 |
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Makes me sad and want to share your grief. Just remember that when we feel most alone, that's when we realize that we are never alone, hard as it is to feel.
Chip Bergeron |
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| Reviewed by baz busbe |
8/19/2011 |
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| Such an amazing poem, with words so true, It sure is a lonely road, was the anniversary of my boyfriends death this week, I am not in contact with his family or anyone who knew him to grieve with. Have felt unbearably alone. Your story gives me a glimpse of hope though, thank you for writing such a sensitive poem. God bless. Baz |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
8/18/2011 |
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| ONLY ONE WHO HAS PERSONALLY EXPERIENCED IT, COULD DO JUSTICE TO THE DESCRIPTION OF THIS VERY HARD STATE. BUT THANK GOD, YOUR LAST TWO LINES GIVES ONE A HOPE OF THE AGES...FOR JUST AROUND THE BEND, THERE IS LIGHT! SUPERBLY DONE! THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
8/17/2011 |
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The elements of grief so very eloquently captured in your words, Donna.....only one who has grieved can truly understand...Very well done!
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
8/17/2011 |
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Well versed with the deep pain that we all experience and in many cases how it changes our lives and perspective forever...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Richard King |
8/17/2011 |
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Nicely done & well said.
Grief most definitely is a lonely road, but good friends help to lessen the burden.
Thank you for always being there. Dick |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
8/17/2011 |
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| Grief is a Lonely Road - how so very true. And coming out of it, is always a blessing. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
8/16/2011 |
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Grief is a lonely road but I always took comfort in the fact that if the death made me so sad then I must have loved and been loved by them very much.
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| Reviewed by Kathryn Perry |
8/16/2011 |
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Beautiful words my friend!
Hugs and Blessings |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
8/16/2011 |
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Yep. There is always a light, you just have to search for it, hold back and wait for it, or make a light of your own. However you choose the light will always be there for you.
Nice poem. Excellent wordplay. |
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