|Reviewed by richard poor
|it makes me crazee...dreamy!|
|Reviewed by E. Richardson
|ahhhh...this was a sensual delight, one of those little fantasies, much done but little revealed. Splendid composition and flow in this.|
|Reviewed by M Flack
|I especially liked this line...
"traced your lips with my tongue."
Wow, very hot...
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Pat this poem would make anyone roar, lion, man, mouse or flea. Anyone looking to the sky for his soul. And please tell all these other guys to lay off. I spotted you first. Your magnificence always shines through. Hugs Bill
p.s. Happy Easter Lady Patricia
|Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
|Reviewed by john zimmerman
|a very nice vignette
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|This is incredible poetry, Pat! I like everything about it.|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|wow! is right,
this is and outstanding
and profound piece
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Wow..this was outstanding! Excellent and beautiful poetry,
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Wow! You were sorely tempted!|
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|Pat this is one of your best...remarkable
writing....powerful ... just superb....
you always knock me over with your writing..
But this one is special...floria
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Another awesome post, from an awesome poetess!|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Damn Ted! Sorry so-and-so. Stole MY thunder. Said what I wanted to say. Well, let me just opine with, You, dear, are in a class all alone. Uh, huh. You are atop the literary mountain. You are Wonder Woman of wordly pursuits. Damn Ted!|
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|I nearly missed this because of your name change. P., Eileen is right when she says you should rule. Reading one of your poems is one of the most pleasurable things I could do in life. Each and every time I am inspired as well as awed by your creations.|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|This is excellent..... Love the last stanza perfection.|
|Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)
|Patricia, this is FANTASTIC! This write has so many great descriptions, so many outstanding metaphors, and possesses such a wry and self-assured voice... you can actually "hear" these thoughts flow through the protagonist's mind!
Love this bit:
"Beyond the shadows of black tie dancers,
I gauged your motions.
Every languid movement
of sleep-inducing climax."
Yas...oh yas. A superb write!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Pat you always floor me, and this one just blew me away!
With such command you should rule the oceans!;-)