|Reviewed by Cles Wilson
|Go on with your Bad Self. I LOVE THIS!!!!|
|Reviewed by Sandra Mushi
|I felt like I was in the cafe ... smiling at the petite dark-skinned waitress. Excellent poem, Patricia.
|Reviewed by Franz Kessler
|Some extrordinary sparkles of imagery penned here. I could feel the ambience. Outstanding poetry. Franz|
|Reviewed by Cynth'ya email@example.com
|highly descriptive, left me with "wish-I-was-there" feelings.
A poem that takes me "there."
cynth'ya lewis reed
|Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)
|Pat, this is absolutely OUTSTANDING! The P.O.V., the scene setting, the desciptions, your observations, the poetic "voice" -- ALL EXTRAORDINARY! Well worthy of major publication!
Submit this, Perfumed Irritable Badger <don't hit!>, submit it!
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was outstanding, just an excellent poem!
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|This is a work of art!|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|What can I say except I like the way you paint a picture with words.|
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|VEry good write!!!!!|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|a wonderfully worded moment ... outstanding insight and prespective ...|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Superbly capturing the moment. Mesmerizing. Love it. Thank you for this offering, Patricia. Love and peace to you. Regis|
|Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
|Excellent, this is very effective in reaching into that place in my mind that take me the reader to that very same place that you so meaningfully write of...wonderful piece.
|Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
|EXCELLENT write, Patricia!|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|I love your style Pat~|
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Your poetry dear Pat is an 'open mind' that no one understands until they learn to listen with their heart. This poem is striking and incendiary, and burns me inside with the flame of your ideas and feelings. Hugs always Bill|
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|Now I remember why I always look forward to reading your new stuff. It is just beyond my ability to express how good it is.|
|Reviewed by Tami Ryan
|Wow, your friends are right. Descriptive and emotive - I felt this. What a wonderful piece, Patricia. Thank you.|
|Reviewed by E. Richardson
|outstanding! Patricia, this is outstanding! You painted a picture here with deft strokes of a fine brush...I am in awe.|
|Reviewed by Londis Carpenter
|kind of like getting an inexpensive vacation to the isles. Love them sunburned beauties.|
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|WOW .... Pat I felt I was right there with you...
starbucks I hope...this was powerful..the description
of the girls was so vivid...truly fantastic writing
from you...you bring it right to the reader...floria
|Reviewed by A PAX
|thank you for showing us your day......thru your eyes........
an open spirit is the most wise.......
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
i love love LOVE this one--o, what imagery and simple prose just drives. this. home. precisely! *STANDING OVATION*
i'm very partial to chinese, myself...mebbe i'll have to hang out there more???? if they give you this much inspiration--wow!!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :) BRAVA!!!!
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|terrific write, patricia! well done! (in a way, i can relate; i work with non-english speaking people myself, and it is maddening!)
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :)
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Don't ever stop frequenting those restaurants and coffee shops, Patricia; this is a marvelous write.|