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| Reviewed by Tova Gabrielle |
4/15/2005 |
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| holy shit! what is it, the poem makes me wonder? a satanic cult?! this is one f'in' evocative poem! |
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| Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain |
2/16/2005 |
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Patricia,
Cleverly conceived and written - outstanding!!
Best wishes,
Robert |
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| Reviewed by Lisa Cannons |
6/17/2004 |
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*shuddering* why do I do this to myself late at night!!!!
LOL
Loved every eerie minute of it!
Irish |
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| Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader) |
6/10/2004 |
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Pat, I don't know how this one got past me...
But I sure am glad I found it! What a menacing, eerie write -- absolutely a first class gem! I LOVE it! Your talent for describing the darkness that makes us uncomfortable is second to none -- if anything I hunger ot read MORE of your darker works!
This was so good I didn't want it to end!
Outstanding!
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| Reviewed by Cynth'ya cynthyaspeaks@gmail.com |
6/4/2004 |
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Expressive in epic proportions!
Peace 2 U Patricia,
cynth'ya lewis reed |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
6/2/2004 |
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| Sounds like the Eagles' "Hotel California" I'm not Catholic and glad I'm not going there---brrrrr--is it cold in here? |
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| Reviewed by ya mama (Reader) |
6/2/2004 |
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| a fab write. |
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| Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) |
6/2/2004 |
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| As far as the Cat Stevens mention, he is being followed by C.I.A. |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
6/1/2004 |
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Wow...I loved this, excellently dark and bone chilling!
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
6/1/2004 |
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chilling and dark poetry at its best, pat! very nice!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
6/1/2004 |
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| Sure glad I was left out of the guest list! Wow this is chilling, Pat. |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
6/1/2004 |
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| Patricia, very mesmerizing write. I still get those feeling whenever I pass a church. The music and language of yesterday still lingers on the mind. |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
5/31/2004 |
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Awesonme poetry and I love the pic and the muse.....
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
5/31/2004 |
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Powerful write Patricia!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
5/31/2004 |
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Masterpiece written all over this one Pat!
I've got shivers and chills, thanks to you;-)! |
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| Reviewed by Tami Ryan |
5/31/2004 |
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| Whoa. Powerful words, these. |
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| Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader) |
5/31/2004 |
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This is some post>>>I got scared, Patricia!!!It is raining out here,and power gone PC running on UPS backup...And your poem made the mood even chilling for me... <GRIN>
POWERFUL, HARDHITTING poem! |
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