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| Reviewed by Micha Julian |
9/25/2006 |
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god, i love your work, been too long since I've been able to get in/on and read, but here you are and this is another, this speaks so clearly of the 'man' and I Love all the Imagery and that last ...that question of the Nipple, well...perfect, what and ending ...what a poem!!!!!
the whole of it...
thank you, you are so fine and well, simply bravo and thanks,
michele |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Terry |
6/9/2006 |
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Funny how they proclaim to be men, but when it comes to something as simple as saying nipple, they get red faced and either don't say anything, or stammer and stutter, or just get up and leave. Giggle. I really enjoyed this one. Men 0, Patricia 1 (giggle).
With love n hugs,
Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be." |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
4/7/2006 |
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Oh Patricia, I loved this, outstanding. just outstanding.
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
4/4/2006 |
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outsatnding Patricia
Love & Peace
William |
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| Reviewed by Mark Mahoney |
3/25/2006 |
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| this is a very intricate piece of work, the more one reads it the more there is in it, well done...Mark |
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| Reviewed by richard poor |
10/25/2005 |
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| nibble...very good!!! |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
10/20/2005 |
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hahahaha...this is so good.
I love the hairs on the chest bit. |
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| Reviewed by Nordette Adams |
9/27/2005 |
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ROFL! OMG, this is fantastic. I loved it. Wonderful imagery and great left hook. ~~Nordette
PS: I sent you a message at AVQ email. |
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| Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson |
9/20/2005 |
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Delightful poem! Wonderful phrases!
"His hands were bluebirds
let loose in Eden."
I enjoyed! |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
9/19/2005 |
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Now that put a lift to my step and a sparkle to my eye!
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
9/18/2005 |
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Powerful offering!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
9/17/2005 |
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Wow! Powerful point well made, Patricia. Thank you. Love and peace.
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Sandra Corona |
9/17/2005 |
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Bravo!
:)Sandy |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
9/17/2005 |
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Patricia,
Many covers are different than what they appear to be. Being able to see what's beyond that cover is priceless. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
9/16/2005 |
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| great descriptive character analysis ... |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
9/16/2005 |
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How do you do it Pat!?! So unique so flawless in delivery! Masterful!
A joy to read the work of a gifted mind!
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
9/16/2005 |
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| I know . . . er . . . knew that man. Last time I saw him he was performing over at Muscle Beach. Good stuff. |
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| Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader) |
9/16/2005 |
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Patricia, this is a terrific character/caricature-sketch:
"This man
overflowed
with hand gestures
huge and fluttery.
His hands were bluebirds
let loose in Eden.
Butterflies come to nap
on a leather-clad steering wheel."
It says volumes about the man and about the scene with compact elegance.
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