|
| Reviewed by Rodney Bohen |
4/25/2003 |
|
P.Gomes
Smiles, sings and shines she does!
Rodney Evan Bohen |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by A PAX |
3/11/2003 |
|
Art is an extension of the soul
Some souls whisper, some roar
I applaud and respect any efforts made
Even if I find them tepid
But I would never critize anothers presentation.....it would be like saying...gee lady...u got one fucking ugly baby! lol
but I can think it!!!
lol....ahhhhhhh you got me smiling!!!
This is great!!!
Thanks!!! |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Adam Walsvik |
3/11/2003 |
|
Scathing!
Adam |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) |
3/10/2003 |
|
| Oh yes Patricia.. the ones that come in minutes with feelings are the best..Oh I like form poetry..sonnets etc..but I also admire the poets as yourself that write with soul..and oh well...every once in awhile I can too..LOL..this was so great to read..thanks for your support...floria |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Birdie Houston |
3/8/2003 |
|
| Superb write ! and I give this an 11+ |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Sandra Corona |
3/8/2003 |
|
Poetry is personal. What is great to one, may annoy another. We can correct spelling and/or grammar for the sake of refinement but thoughts, style is 'each artist/poet' for themself. No one has had your experience, your life but you! Fabulously put! Sandy
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Melissa Rives |
3/8/2003 |
|
| Very awesome indeed!!!! |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
3/7/2003 |
|
| hahahaha....well done |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Mike Ill (Reader) |
3/7/2003 |
|
| mmmm... i love this. a "fuck you" poem that doesn't suck. |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J |
3/7/2003 |
|
Pat, that 69 shines !!!!
Love from India - Joel - |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
3/7/2003 |
|
Oh yes! I love this! says everything I wish I had the courage to!
Excellent!
Reindeer |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy |
3/6/2003 |
|
| rules are made to be broken, and poetry is where breaking the rules is part of the charm. To each his own, metered, footted, or free, that is the freedom of a poet's art. |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Madame X |
3/6/2003 |
|
Really great write. I go in lulls...sometimes inspired, sometimes not.
I really enjoyed this write. |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci |
3/6/2003 |
|
My Guru!
I am just going to say DAMN!!! Love it when you get down and dirty! HUGE, HUGE, GRIN!!!
Love You,
Maria
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen |
3/6/2003 |
|
| Great form and content, Patricia!! :) |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
3/6/2003 |
|
| Way to go P. if you have nothing to say, say nothing, that's a motto I try to live by.Fine work! |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Bill Murray |
3/6/2003 |
|
I thoroughly agree with you Pat. When I write and it is good, it pours out. I do use rhyme and meter, but I wasn't taught it.
It flows naturally. Those that have little to say here at AD ... say it in a thousand pedantic ways and never make an impression.
They are fairies that fly around with words that lack meaning and go nowhere except back to their very educated minds. Your words are powerful and influence your readers. Don't ever change the way you produce your poetry. And screw the critics who pretend to be lions and knights with strong credentials. The ones they bring to the table are usually written on toilet paper. God love you! I do! Bill |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Erica Ivory |
3/6/2003 |
|
| I keep a book with me in my car and next to my bed... And write whatever comes to mind.. whatever is on my mind.. Great Write |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Erica Ivory |
3/6/2003 |
|
| excellent:) in my opinion if theres rules its not art; thoughts cant be contained in the brain, they have to be let out on paper or some other medium, so how could they therefore be contained in something as small and base as metre and rhyme? i wish i had more words to say in support of your freind but i think youve said it best anyway |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
3/6/2003 |
|
| P.Gomes, excellent words to live by. I always like to say what comes from the heart. I feel if I make mistakes then they are mine to make. I write first and foremost, " pour moi " |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Josephine Bohen |
3/6/2003 |
|
you and me both
josie |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
3/6/2003 |
|
~P,
This is so gooooooood!!!!
I loved it and I hate those sites to they have a meter on the front page pain vs no pain Ha.....
Peg |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Amber Lynn |
3/6/2003 |
|
Amen! Thank you for saying what is on my mind. You've still got it, and obviously what you have to say (when you do have something to say) is worth listening to. Great Job.
Amber Lynn |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Christine Morell |
3/6/2003 |
|
Mine are out quickly too before the emotion passes or the memory fades or I forget what I was feeling passionate about!
Love your writing and love this.
Chrissie |
|
|
|
Bookmarks
Share
Print
Save