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|Reviewed by Jerry Andrews
|The water seems a little murky to me. I get the mood but honestly don't understand the meaning. By the way, thanks for correcting enrichen to enrich in my poem Tasting The Night. No one ever corrects my English. I'm an old English and journalism major and editor of my college paper. Thanks! I needed that. I'll get back and read some of your other stuff. I know it's just where my mind is at this moment. Take care. Jerry- Try Gianetta Ellis if you haven't already. You'll like her.|
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Dark water indeed Susannah. Your intelligent mind shines through in this poem. Maybe it a poem that has to be relived more than once in a lifetime. Bill Murray|
|Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
|A dark write for sure. Chilling. Excellent imagery and flow.
|Reviewed by Todd Cheney
|This one seems full of despair, like a lament to things lost.|