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|Reviewed by Jim Dunlap
|I agree that this would be a good slam poem. It has a definite edge to it.|
|Reviewed by Candida Eittreim
|Reviewed by Friend
|But did you explode? Did the clock get to zero? Or was the scream just inside you; not part of the existent world?
|Reviewed by Jerry Andrews
|Hi- Susannah- Your foto caught my eye- an interesting looking person. I like the way you express yourself in your bio. I'm an old journalism major myself. Your poem here is very powerful. I enjoyed it. Read my Out, Long Gone Love, Willow, Journey and Old Souls and let me have some real feedback, like I know you can. I'll do three more at least of yours, for an even swap. Looking forward to hearing from you. Thanks- Jerry|
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|Life is a roller coaster stuck on Let 'er rip, ain' it? Thank God for friends who help slow it down. You have captured the breathlessness very well. Ups & downs &
lurches! Thanks for posting this.