|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|great touching sage piece my friend, nothing comes free, not even a smile. g|
|Reviewed by Gracie McKeever
|Very well-done, and well said.|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|So true Bhuwan, this was wise and wonderfully written!
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Wise verses, Bhuwan. Thank you for this offering, my friend. Love and peace to you. Regis|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|So much wisdom in this one my friend....|
|Reviewed by William Neven
|A fine, descriptive, philosophical piece, Mr. Thapaliya - not only about happiness - but with respect to the faces one must wear in spite of the present lack of such in his or her life at times while dealing with a seemingly-unending variation of emotional states.|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|"Happiness can take you anywhere but you have to pay your own fare" - what profound truth this is, Bhuwan, and should be inscribed in stone somewhere! As long as we search for happiness outside of ourselves, we become dependent on others and externalities to become our happiness-providers. But you rightly suggest that it is a state of being on the inside which, when you inhabit that place, is not something that you are easily robbed of when knocked about by life's bumpy roads!! It is a wonderful thing to know this inner equilibrium. And tears as well as smiles are all part of that rich fabric of happiness, for you cannot enjoy one without the other. Emotional wheels must be oiled and allowed to run freely, lest they clog and cause us to freeze and cease-up. Wonderful, insightful writing here, my Friend! Thank you. Keep on rollin'! Kate xx|
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|No matter what you write, I like it.|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Beautiful write of wise words.|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Great write! Enjoy being able to read you again :-)|
|Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
Incredible words of true wisdom.
If you cannot find your own happiness within yourself, it will forever elude you.
|Reviewed by E. Richardson
|very well done, Bhuwan...a meditive write of wisdom.|
|Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
|A most interesting perception, Bhuwan!
I especially like the first line. Excellent!
|Reviewed by jude forese
|your wisdom runs deep ... excellent poem!|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Concise and very profound, in your unique style. don't lat anyone throw a spanner in the works..|
|Reviewed by Tracey Hardie
|Bhuwan.. wonderful write.. but it sucks when you get run over by someone elses cogwheel... lol (Keep the pen flowing!)|
|Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger
|BRILLIANT, Poet Bhuwan Thapaliya!!! Thank You for sharing it.|
|Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
|You're very wise, Bhuwan. Enjoyed reading this poem.
|Reviewed by Bonnie Torrente
I loved this, just because it's so true.
|Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
|WONDERFUL wisdom-packed poem, Bhuwan...
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Right on! I'm smiling now........|
|Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)
|Wonderful poem laced with truth and wisdom.|
|Reviewed by Linda Murray
|Thanks for sharing your wisdom with us. Your poems give such insight to life.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|More wisdom from the master! Splendid!
Bhuwan, I love to read your poetry!
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Excellent lines. I especially like,
"Happiness can take
but you have to
pay your own fare."