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Come, my darling! utter not a word
by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Sunday, December 05, 2004
Rated "G" by the Author.
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I lie by the river, stretching my arms
to the eternity, in search of you
with the stars in my eyes, weaving
the moonlight in my soul with joy.
Love, O my love, come to me,
come in my arms, and lay down
your dreams in the valley of
my shoulder, where the heart
ripens and the bird of love sings
the song of the lover’s unity.
‘Come, my darling!’ utter not
a word. Close your eyes, and
lower your lips over mine.
Drown me in the pool of ambrosia
and let me moan with the infinite,
beneath the heavens virgin core.
Tomorrow, I hope to wake up
with the dews of your breathe
all over my face, and read
the morning paper in your eyes.

Copyright 2004 Bhuwan Thapaliya

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Reviewed by L. Figgins 2/11/2005
A song of love, indeed...
Reviewed by William Bonilla 12/11/2004
outstanding romantic poetry
My friend
thanks for sharing

William ....peace & Love
Reviewed by Linda Roman 12/10/2004
lovely poem
Reviewed by karen lozada (Reader) 12/10/2004
it sure was full of romance....:-)
Reviewed by Zenith Elliott 12/9/2004
Well written romantic verse, Bhuwan! ~Z~
Reviewed by Cynth'ya 12/9/2004
First four lines. The last four lines.
The rest in between is a testament to the good stuff nestled between the beginning and the end. Altogether, your original style just rocks the daylights out of this page!

blessin's Bhuwan,
cynth'ya lewis reed
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 12/9/2004
This is one of the most refreshing romantic writes I have read. You have done extremely well with this one.
Reviewed by Silke Lance, Dr. Ph (Reader) 12/8/2004
A brilliant piece of poetry!
Reviewed by andrea coltman 12/7/2004
Another exceptional write flows from your pen wishes Andrea
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 12/6/2004
An exquisite, soft sensual write, Bhuwan. I am so glad that I found where you were posting, I so enjoyed your poetry on LPC, now I can enjoy your work again.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside 12/6/2004
A love to be lost in, Bhuwan! You final line is such a contrast in terms of concept and language, but fits just right and speaks volumes! The visual is stunning and is a perfect compliment to your beautiful sentiments. "Lay down your dreams in the valley of my shoulder" and "let me moan with the infinite, beneath the heavens virgin core" has such a sense of deep passion, loving care and tenderness. You epitomise the heart of the self-giving, wholly yielded lover. Melting, thank you. Kate xx
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 12/6/2004
Ah Bhuwan, such a beautiful and lovely poem, this was outstanding,

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain 12/6/2004

Quite an interesting pic ... your sharpened quill pen has entertained us once again with a resounding, superlative poem ... greatly enjoyed this write!!

Best wishes,

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen 12/6/2004
Ethereal longings of the most sensuous nature, Bhuwan. I especially am taken with this phrase:

"lay down
your dreams in the valley of
my shoulder"

Reviewed by Sandie Angel 12/6/2004
Wonderful lovely write, Bhuwan! Enjoyed this one very much!

Sandie May Angel :o)
Reviewed by Sherry Heim 12/6/2004
Oh, this is so beautiful, Bhuwan. Such a lovely romance you have penned. There is a soft and gentle reverence, cast in your verses, that made me sigh a sweet sigh. Very, very nice!
Take care,
Reviewed by jude forese 12/6/2004
lovely romantic poetry ...
Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga 12/6/2004
Dear Bhuwan,

Who could refuse such beauty and love? This is so wonderfully romantic, such grace and in every word, written from a passionate heart, she must be truly special :) Inspiring Bhuwan, keep penning your golden beauties. Enjoyed this tremendously. Take care, and be well.

warm hugs
Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader) 12/5/2004
read the morning paper in your eyes. Ahhh This is such a roantic poem.
I Love It.
God Bless You and Your Family
Reviewed by Sage Writer (Reader) 12/5/2004
Magnificent and romantic
Reviewed by Regina Pounds 12/5/2004
Bhuwan, ah you have found love!

Your poetry always was, in this romantic vein, it still is.

much happiness to you!
Reviewed by Huda Orfali 12/5/2004
Wow, so romantic, so beautiful. I love the last line
Love & Peace

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