|Reviewed by L. Figgins
|A song of love, indeed...|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|outstanding romantic poetry
thanks for sharing
William ....peace & Love
|Reviewed by Linda Roman
|Reviewed by karen lozada (Reader)
|it sure was full of romance....:-)|
|Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
|Well written romantic verse, Bhuwan! ~Z~|
|Reviewed by Cynth'ya firstname.lastname@example.org
|First four lines. The last four lines.
VERY VERY VERY VERY powerful!
The rest in between is a testament to the good stuff nestled between the beginning and the end. Altogether, your original style just rocks the daylights out of this page!
cynth'ya lewis reed
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|This is one of the most refreshing romantic writes I have read. You have done extremely well with this one.|
|Reviewed by Silke Lance, Dr. Ph (Reader)
|A brilliant piece of poetry!|
|Reviewed by andrea coltman
|Another exceptional write flows from your pen Bhuwan...best wishes Andrea|
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|An exquisite, soft sensual write, Bhuwan. I am so glad that I found where you were posting, I so enjoyed your poetry on LPC, now I can enjoy your work again.
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|A love to be lost in, Bhuwan! You final line is such a contrast in terms of concept and language, but fits just right and speaks volumes! The visual is stunning and is a perfect compliment to your beautiful sentiments. "Lay down your dreams in the valley of my shoulder" and "let me moan with the infinite, beneath the heavens virgin core" has such a sense of deep passion, loving care and tenderness. You epitomise the heart of the self-giving, wholly yielded lover. Melting, thank you. Kate xx|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Ah Bhuwan, such a beautiful and lovely poem, this was outstanding,
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
Quite an interesting pic ... your sharpened quill pen has entertained us once again with a resounding, superlative poem ... greatly enjoyed this write!!
|Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
|Ethereal longings of the most sensuous nature, Bhuwan. I especially am taken with this phrase:
your dreams in the valley of
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Wonderful lovely write, Bhuwan! Enjoyed this one very much!
Sandie May Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|Oh, this is so beautiful, Bhuwan. Such a lovely romance you have penned. There is a soft and gentle reverence, cast in your verses, that made me sigh a sweet sigh. Very, very nice!
|Reviewed by jude forese
|lovely romantic poetry ...|
|Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
Who could refuse such beauty and love? This is so wonderfully romantic, such grace and in every word, written from a passionate heart, she must be truly special :) Inspiring Bhuwan, keep penning your golden beauties. Enjoyed this tremendously. Take care, and be well.
|Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
|read the morning paper in your eyes. Ahhh This is such a roantic poem.
I Love It.
God Bless You and Your Family
|Reviewed by Sage Writer (Reader)
|Magnificent and romantic|
|Reviewed by Regina Pounds
|Bhuwan, ah you have found love!
Your poetry always was excellent...now, in this romantic vein, it still is.
much happiness to you!
|Reviewed by Huda Orfali
|Wow, so romantic, so beautiful. I love the last line
Love & Peace