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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
4/22/2003 |
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I loved how you expressed this paradox..quite excellent!
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| Reviewed by Kelie Urbanec |
4/22/2003 |
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Bhuwan,
Very beautifully said. I dont know if I could put it in a better way but you sure said it in your own sweet words. Very very exceptional.
~Kelie~ |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
4/22/2003 |
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very deep write...the mindgame of love...lust through love...the creation of a new life starts through that.....the most beautiful part of life is love...am I confused here?
Love
Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Christine Morell |
4/22/2003 |
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Outstanding writing, Bhuwan
Chrissie |
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| Reviewed by ya mama (Reader) |
4/22/2003 |
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| beautiful bhuwan |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
4/22/2003 |
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| Excellent Write, Bhuwan! Love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn. (((HUGS))) :) |
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| Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy |
4/22/2003 |
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Bnuwan, again you have taken mere words and created a thing of beauty that provokes the reader's mind and heart.
Bobbi |
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| Reviewed by Marlene Dawn |
4/22/2003 |
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Excellent as always.
*Marlene* |
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| Reviewed by the phantom pheonix |
4/22/2003 |
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| this was very deep thinking and awesome nice job on this fantastic poem |
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| Reviewed by Erica Ivory |
4/22/2003 |
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| Yes.. I agree with the rest.. thought provoking... AND beautiful! |
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| Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) |
4/22/2003 |
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| Mine too |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
4/22/2003 |
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another wonderful write my friend,
excellent
William |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
4/21/2003 |
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| Gosh great paradoxical write, your intelligence weaves its way through out.... |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
4/21/2003 |
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| Beautiful... |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
4/21/2003 |
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| Bhuwan you always provoke meaningful thought, with your beautiful pieces...;-) Well done |
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| Reviewed by na na (Reader) |
4/21/2003 |
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| Bhuwan, that is a certain paradox when two are in love. Loved the poem and love your writing also. You education spakles through your poems and your intelligence sparkles even more. bill |
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