what i don't know
by Lainey Easton
Monday, February 15, 2010
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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i thought that i was over it
i thought i'd be just fine
i thought that i'd stop caring
and know where draw the line
i thought you'd given up on it
i thought you'd had enough
i thought you'd stop believing
because you said times were tough
i didn't think i'd feel like this
i didn't think i'd cry
i didn't think i'd be confused
and forced to ask you why
i didn't think you'd be this way
i didn't think you'd bend
i didn't think you'd turn out to
be just like other men
you make me want to smile
you make me want to sing
you make me want to laugh out loud
but more than anything
i cry when you're away from me
i cry when you get mad
i cry when you dont seem to care
about the thoughts i've had
i wish you'd just believe me
i wish you'd make it right
i wish you'd see me crying for you
when daytime turns to night
and maybe then you'd understand
how much i care for you
but 'til the day you find my thoughts
i don't know what to do...
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|Reviewed by Brandi Wroblewski
|I can relate and I really enjoy this write. Thankkkk youuuuuu|
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
I know that you are lamenting something here,
and that the undercurrents reflect deep emotion,
but the flow is great and the poem would lend itself
nicely to being a song. Good job Lainey!