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| Reviewed by Thomas |
2/27/2003 |
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| This is very nice. I'm not sure I understand what you're trying to say, perhaps written for someone special who will understand (sort of a "private message"), but very nice metaphors. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
2/17/2003 |
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| when the ships pass, signal them... |
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| Reviewed by Birdie Houston |
2/17/2003 |
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Nice write I enjoyed A Passing Ship's Love
makes one seriously think |
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| Reviewed by na na (Reader) |
2/17/2003 |
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| This is so deep and very personal like a recent experience? Bill |
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| Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) |
2/17/2003 |
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| Passing ships are good when you are in only a stranded life raft. Enjoyed. |
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