|Reviewed by neerja gandhi
|yess..yess...school bells good at times but..school days best though...loved it,enjoyed your poem...also your say on rhyme, thyme...wonderful :) best wishes, Ch'erie..neerja|
|Reviewed by Thomas Mutchler
|Enjoyed this. School bells could be an annoying sound.
|Reviewed by Taylor Ryan
|Oh Ch'erie...I have to tell you whem I began reading this, all I could think about was a childhood friend, even though the verse led me to believe you were musing on a more adult, empassioned love...I kept thinking ..well...what is it that's making me think I should be thinkinfg on more adult lines when suddenly. I discovered, you must have shared the same , special childhood friendships I did. A lovely coincidence!
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
I remember the school bell very well. The kind that has a wooden handle.
|Reviewed by H. Lena Jones
|Hi Ch'erie, I enjoyed this one, and I do remember the swings, but try as I might, I don't remember anyone whispering sweet nothings or anythings in my ear, left or right. :) I sure missed out on a lot it seems!
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Very lovely write ma'Ch'erie!!
|Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
|What a surprise ending. That was quite a poem. Great. Victor|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|This is memory divine Ch'erie! I loved every line! Beautifully expressed, and that pic is gorgeous!Kudo's!...ET|
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
You have blown me bloody mind here mate.
Just lovely! And the simile: "like two vines intertwined in hope" was masterful.
Cheers from SoCal ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Ahh it forces the reader to remember and recapture the sweet innocence of those childhood days when holding hands was more of a turn on then all the lovemaking to come. Your write brought back memories of that first fumbling bumbling kiss in the school yard that was better then all the kisses that came after. Your words bring back all the wonderful memories and what a swinging write.
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Captivating write. You are a true romantic.|
|Reviewed by Tactfully Naive
|Till the school bell rang! Lovely humourous touch.
Brought to mind my prowess on a rope swing outside our school playground. I was only 10 but fell head over heals or a girl in my class. I thought she'd be impressed by my tarzan antics on that rope swing. And I hated it when the bell rang. I never did get her onto that swing. Thanks for the nostalgic trip!
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Charming and sweet, Ch'erie; very well done! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
Such a sweet and romantic setting you create here in this visual and emotional classic..
And I love the dramatic ending, which could have been one of many conclusions..
Gorgeous graphic underscores this absolute beauty of a write..
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Beautiful, Ch'erie, but it's been too long for me...sigh....LOL Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Love the ending, and I, too, remember when!|