|Reviewed by Dark Knight
|I need a cigarette and I don't smoke--Passion romance and a bit of Naughty thrown in...hmmm now where did I hear that word before?-LOL|
|Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
|Excellent poem,I enjoy reading it,take care
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Thank you for sharing this compelling encounter, Ch'erie. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by jude forese
|yes, mission accomplished ;)|
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|Looking at one another and a fuse being lit. Oh goodness, the trouble I got into when that happened to me in my youth. Very intense scene you captured here Ch'erie. Well written. Incidentally, what the hecks a 'donger'?
Blessings to you ...
|Reviewed by Tim VanGuilder (Reader)
|powerful!! you painted a picture; I was there!!!!! UNBELIEVABLE!!!!! Tj|
|Reviewed by David Delaney
|WOW!!!...so loved this one Ch'erie, great writing & story.
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|wow!! fantastic and stirring write!|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|This is one hell of a story, like a miniture movie you unfolded it from beginning to end with all the emotions that make a great story. Love, fear, excitment, passion and even lust all combined to a fantastic word orgasm. Love it Cherry Pie
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Oh, what passion lies between these lines - well done, Chazza.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Love Triumphs - Marvelous! And LOL at my old Jersey Devil brother!|
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Wow Ch'erie, a great write as they say is still hot and steamy. thank you for sharing.
Newfie hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|JUST as this AWESOME HOT Poem Ch'erie!
This is/was stunning from beginning to end, the easy flow and I felt absorbed into their lives, cheering them on, as they got their groove on, not knowing if this bond will last forever more, into eternity I would say for the powerful passions that thrusted upon this page!
Loved it and a I will savor it! YOU know, I hope many soldiers (not married) will have this golden opportunity!
To share a lust of passion that beat like an animal and to know,
you could die for....
Utter romantic and not stuid at all!
I want MORE!Thank you for sharing your erotic, loving, romantic, sensous heart Ch'erie!
Warmest Blessings Of LOVE, PEACE, and Bright Light, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExooo
I think I'm inspired, to write with desire! Ahhh/
|Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
|This is great, I could just picture the whole scene, powerful emotions you evoke in this writing, well done...
In Christs Love
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|OOOh baby, that one is hot, sizzlin' like bacon on a griddle...Geez, now I got to take a cold shower or open a window and let in the freezing night air...you cooked with this one...Ed|