|Reviewed by Eugene Williams
|But you have reached beyond human pale and i thank you good piece of humanities weakest quest for perfection withou knowing why...|
|Reviewed by Vesna Blueflame
|You rolled the dice.
You set the stakes.
You opened yourself to me
..fantastic stuff..hey ..your mind enthralls me..
|Reviewed by Nickolaus Pacione
|I agree with Mark on this one, this one does have a very strong TOOL vibe to it. Your short stories does have it as well, but never really reviewed your poems until now.|
|Reviewed by Chanti Niven
|Nicholas you have such a unique style. I love reading your work because it makes me think. I have a feeling you enjoy provoking.
|Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
|indeed..balance requires both givers and takers...|
|Reviewed by harry k stammer (Reader)
|hey, this is like Tool. ever thought of writing for a rock band? hks|
|Reviewed by Fawn Caldwell
|Unique and unusual...I like your style.|
|Reviewed by E. Richardson
|This is good...really good. Methinks you are not referring to a person here...Very well done!|
|Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
|OH MY! I liked this! LOL...maybe I'm twisted. Very strong....well done! Teresa|
|Reviewed by Susannah Carlson
|Are you my ex-husband?
But seriously, very strong, very stark. Powerful.
|Reviewed by anne cunningham
|Reviewed by Josephine Bohen
|Reviewed by Cora
|I like the rolling effect of the lines as they tumble one upon the other.
The last 3 lines could be omitted and only retain the refrain:
"I am only the one who takes"
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)