|Reviewed by Philip Sylva
|Love, relationships and marriages are no dreams or phantasm. They are real life situations which can turn ones life for better or for worse. The ups and downs are part of every life situation, the problem is how to sail past them without breaking ones heart. Picking up the pieces of a broken heart is the worst part of a broken marriage. But then, loving and caressing for each other, working together side by side is the solution for a better marriage. Well said Laura!
Your poem is educationally informative.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Although there are never guarantees, but if you care and share and work together side-by-side love may survive.
Let us hope so, Laura. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by JMS Bell
|HOPEFULLY ONE LEARNS FROM PAST MISTAKES AND TAKING A 'CHANCE' IS A STEP OF FAITH...ONE NEVER KNOWS. BUT, WHEN THEY RELY ON GOD TO LEAD THE WAY AND GO WITH THEM DAY BY DAY THEN LOVE AND MARRIAGE...WORKS! WELL DONE, LAURA...ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by John Domino
|A great poem that - Hits home!
God Bless You!
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|"Although there are never guarantees.."
and that's the challenge of it, Laura,
and yet we find the will (the need and want)
to try again; i admire your spirit and strength.
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|Ride, ride the storms, but
let the thrills be yours as
You have held on tight with
all Your Might!! *Laura*
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|second time around may be the charm
How so very true, and I'm very grateful that it was for me.
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
|So insightful. Hate those roller coaster rides. Love it. Liz|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Yes we all can fight love or strive to make it better but it takes two if it is to succeed.
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Laura, my mind is in a whirlwind, as your words speak truth...so many broken rides, if only they could all withstand the downs that go with the ups :)
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Sadly I understand the picking up the pieces of a shattered heart. Not mine, Nanette's. I've forgiven myself for all my faults, but not that.|
|Reviewed by Mark Lichterman
|Marriage is really hard work. Young people think that it's sex and good times, but those that stick it out, to stay within the marriage through the good and bad times is hard work... But in time the couple begins to know each other and do less of what makes the other unhappy and more of what makes the other happy, but sometimes it is hard work.
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Really nice motion in your poem through the carnival imagery, and wise is your clear eyed look at the whole picture ~
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Much wisdom in your words, Laura....it takes "two"...additionally, the second time around is awesome!