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A Lone African Son's Ode to his African Mother
by Safi Abdi
Wednesday, August 27, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.

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The African Mother’s story is as distressing as it is typical. Assaulted from all sides, right and left, the African woman is the epitome of suffering. If hardship had form it would be the African woman. No other African story, however, equals in absurdity, horror or dimension, as that of the Somali woman. At home, the Somali woman is a castoff, hungry, and displaced; abroad, she is a begger, a refugee. The Somali woman is a woman alone, a wife without a soul mate, a daughter without a father figure; a sister without a real brother, a mother without real sons, she is a ghost without national pride. This is a woman denied the most basic of human rights. Her very existence is yanked from under her feet by the very people who were supposed to take care of her. And she sees nothing but darkness all around her; buried alive by the same primitivism that buried young girls alive in the pre-Islamic era. But then just when she thought, well, this is it, a whiff of fresh scent dilutes the thick air of desperartion and a brotherly embrace holds her close, if only for a few moments. Through the lines of ‘My Dear African Mother’, the African mother is lifted up from the doldrums and whisked into an ambience of melody and symphony; a trip of joy extraordinaire; a most wonderful sojourn whereby she casts off her troubles and drinks from the rivers of love and remembrance. Abwaan Mohamed's pen has produced an elegant discourse of creativity and eloquence. And the African mother emerges from these pools of gratitude and reverence, sparkling like the pearl she truly is, honorable and precious; a rare experience these days for the African Mother.
On behalf of all African Mothers, I salute Poet Mohamed Abdikader Daud and thank him for shining the limelight on this most deserving human being.


MY DEAR AFRICAN MOTHER
 
My dear, dear and dear African Mother!
You are my Rhesus factor,
The positive Rhesus factor,
Not the negative Rhesus factor;
 
Your peace is my logo,
Your happiness is my motto,
Your comfort is my ego,
Your fitness is my manifesto;
 
My dear, dear and dear African Mother!
The mother of my real mother,
The mother of my true father,
The mother of my son and daughter;
 
It is me at peace of your advent,
It is me depend on your talent,
It is You smile at me on your lap,
And I smile at you for the smile to smile;
 
My dear, dear and dear African Mother!
I flourish, flourish and flourish when you are at peace,
I diminish, diminish and diminish when you are at war,
Mum, negative you is negative me and the whole world;
 
I can not forget the time you wept and wept,
Wept and wept because of bringing me out,
You are irreplaceable and natural pain-killer,
Natural pain-killer created for my care and care;
 
If gold makes meaning, it is you Mother!
If money is valuable, it is you Mother!
If diamond is dear, it is you Mother!
If oxygen is important, it is you Mother!
 
I can not call you a wife or a woman!
For you deserve more than the phrase,
Dull is, but who defames your passion,
Dim is, but who denies your vision;
 
I will congratulate you on your golden jubilee,
I will dance upon your diamond jubilee,
I will celebrate for your silver jubilee,
I will chisel your love in the centre of my heart!
 
My dear, dear and dear African Mother!
I feel sorry for you my great darling!
Feel sorry for the violation that you face!
The male-made violation that you suffer!
And then, I burst into tears and cascade!
 
They call me a romantic feminist,
But I am proud of the implicit,
As the explicit is not far from the sense,
And the insight aims at mother-activist;
 
I will neither estimate your subject,
Nor evaluate your object,
For your role needs not the abstract,
And I am too weak to attempt at the perfect!
 
My dear, dear and dear African Mother!
It is you, the surrealist of the social image,
The structuralist of our pure discipline,
The novelist of the modern interrelations;
 
If I were what I am dreaming of,
I should put you above the law!
For you are the reference of law and order,
The law of the natural grass-root law;
 
I am carrying, and I will carry the flower of peace,
Carry it forever for the sake of you Mother,
I will carry it with fingers full of candid care,
Fingers that fray not from your service;
 
If I were able to see a moving love,
I should have invited it for your respect,
If I were capable of making it smile,
I should have told it do that for your pleasure!
 
Fitness is fit, when you are fit!
Greenness is green, when you are green!
Happiness is happy, when you are happy!
Sadness is sad, when you are sad!
 
When your ovary ovulated,
And the ova were taken to the uterus,
It was me liquid went into your womb,
Solidified there and learnt the cost of your love;
 
I made you vomit because of the morning-sickness,
I caused you knackered as a result of the horrible illness,
I cried when you cried of the labour-pain,
But God took the plunge to save you from death! *
 
My dear, dear and dear African Mother!
You will never suffer at my own hands!
I will teach them the meaning of motherhood,
And will make them grow with it into manhood;
 
I will feed you with honey and whatever else you love!
Equip my soul with your leisure and pleasure!
Defend you with my orature and poetry!
Support you with my blood and mercy!

Notes:

* But God took the plunge to save you from death!

It is to be noted, while an artist has the right to exploit poetic license as an enhancement of expression, I do not know if it is appropriate to use above idiom in connection with Allah, Lord of the World. 

Poem is printed here with permission ffom poet Mohamed Abdikadir Daud. 


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Reviewed by m j hollingshead 9/21/2008
poignant
Reviewed by Tarek Hassan 9/8/2008
dear safi,

I do not understand how I was unaware of your talent and power for such a long time. I have always been committed to universal issues in all our lives transcending time and place. You bring me and us back to the reality of the here and now and to be precise, of the tragedy of the here and now as we have made a mess of so many things unnecessarily. With a big bang you strike us with reality as it is without embellishments. You fill in an important gap and perform a vital function for all of us dreamers, believers in the inherent goodness of all humanity. You are a necessary step linking reality to the dream and I'm very grateful that you exist and that you are so prolific with your wonderful arts and creativity.

Tarek Ali Hassan
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 9/7/2008
This is a superb poetic presentation. I salute you and thank you, Safi. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge 9/1/2008
Truly breathtaking poetry!
Reviewed by Somali Community Access Network SomaliCAN 8/31/2008
Hooyooy la'aantaa
Adduunyadu hubaashii
Habayn kama baxdeenoo!

A wonderful tribute to you and all mothers. You are an exceptional mom and I wish you a blessed month of Ramadan. Ramadan Karim.
Reviewed by Louisa Dobbins 8/31/2008
May I perform this poem? Thank you for such splendor!
Reviewed by Sadia G (Reader) 8/30/2008
this is a beautiful poem detailing the lengths of a mother's love. Highly passionate, you can almost feel the words coming to life.
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 8/27/2008
Through all the hardship, dispair, pain and loss you have poured out your heart and soul so others will see and perhaps try to understand the plight. How disheartening that such cruelty still exists today, but holding on to hope and dignity will lead one day to a brighter future. Passionately written...

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 8/27/2008
Gorgeous writing, Safi; very well penned! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle 8/27/2008
This poem is stunning and written with such passion and love.I enjoy reading it,take care

Edwin
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 8/27/2008
Beautiful sharing, Safi: thank you.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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