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Goth Girl
by Kenny J Baez
Thursday, March 31, 2005
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Sitting beside two Goth girls;
Black hair, black clothes,
Black eyelashes,
silver studs in the knee-length boots,
pale daughters-of-Dracula complexions.

I could be in Whitby for a Goth convention,
standing on a crag
looking out on the cold North sea,
but I'm having a coffee break
from learning Swedish,
and the blonde thread running
through my thoughts
has been momentarily lost,
a shadow darkens the sun.

Sneaking a glance at her chill loveliness;
no fangs or love bite from the master
blemish her ivory neck,
and I laugh behind my newspaper,
laugh at the adult restraint
I have to honour,
laugh at the sentence,
Welcome to my castle!

She turns to look my way
but I have to get going
- Age before Beauty -
before the light of those eyes
makes me break
my thousand-year silence.

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Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Boundless imagination!
Reviewed by A PAX
Ohhhhhhhhh this is a chiller.......makes me imagine Lestat, looking at the amatures.......I do like this alot :) could be the beginning of a novel ....maybe????? pax A
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

This composition takes me on trip to imagination... "Goth Girl" strikes my learning mind.

Keep on posting Your jewels.

In admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Jane Rodway
This is great, I love it- as a goth girl at heart, if no longer in dress and makeup, I love this.
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
I love this, Kenny. Somehow, you make me feel as though I am right there watching it all happen. The whole experience stirs something in my soul. Superbly done, my friend. Love and peace. Regis
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
... and before she drives a stake into your heart! Actually, I bet she's just on her way round to look after her Granny and to take the little Yorkie for a walk - no, that WOULD be Whitby! You would cut quite a dash as Goth Man... could start a new trend at Burtons; they could do with vamping up. Braw!! :))
Reviewed by jude forese
a man's poem is his castle ... well penned!
Reviewed by Patricia Gomes
I love where my mind takes me after the closing line. Visions of Master Vamps and all that chillingly good stuff. 3 thumbs up!
Reviewed by Sue Hess
i loved this but then i love most of your poetry kenny
Reviewed by Paul Williams
Excellent write Kenny love the imagery it's all black to me lol...nice one.

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