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|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|Yep. It's all in the eye of the beholder. Nicely done. Patrick|
|Reviewed by JMS Bell
|PERFECT...THE CONTRAST IS DONE SO WELL; POOR GUY, HAPPY LADY. THANKS FOR SHARING THIS KEEPER, DAYVID. LOVE AND BLESSINGS,
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|Living in a large community (over 300 residents) of retired people over the age of 62... I see 'the old man' and 'the old woman' every day...and yes, it is a Dichotomy. Nice write.
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader)
|A bit of a twist: the old man who seems so distressed about his life, may actually be happy being miserable. The elder lady may be, inwardly, unhappy because she was not born in the times that she seems to like so much. All together, they would probably make a lovely couple ... opposites do attract. Ha ha.|
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|a great offering Dayvid!
How utterly important it is to live in our moments
our happiness...our hopes enriching us
and never to dwell in those ole days
which are the good ole days yes...but so is today!!
Every Day Matters
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Love this ~
The attitude is personal power, and what a difference it makes when a smile raises one up!
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|A smile can be the healing energy one needs to start a fresh new day...
Love this one Dayvid..
Much peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe