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Morning Love
by Dayvid Graybill
Saturday, November 12, 2011
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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Drunk in her femininity.

Morning Love



By her femininity

Pouring nakedly

Into my mind


From parted lips

She opens her passionate



Across the drunken state

Of my universe

She slides

Touching celestial points

Of light

Her heavenly body

Shivers slightly



From her vineyard glistens

Morning sun warms

Hills and valleys

Intensity builds

Lapping dangerously

From her ever-flowing stream


Stars and moons

Fall from orbit,

Heaving upward, downward


Our minds entwined

Bodies flailing

Now open

Falling into rapture.



Totally drunk!

By the power of her beauty

As the last drops

From her bottle

Pour across our universe

Of love.


© 2011 Dayvid Graybill


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Reviewed by Dark Knight 11/29/2012
wow-I feel like a Voyeur here-ahem-very passionate
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors 12/10/2011
Gotta love a DUI between the sheets, not to mention traffic school would be a pleasure. Patrick
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 11/20/2011
This reminds me of last weekend when I visited my love who is away on a work assignment for two months. Love what you've expressed via your verses here, Dayvid. Love and peace,

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 11/14/2011
so beautifully romantic!
Reviewed by Jeff Neuman-Lee (Reader) 11/13/2011
Very nice, very beautiful.
Reviewed by Andy Turner 11/13/2011
Intoxication at it's best.
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 11/13/2011
Your words contain a potent mixture of love and intoxication...truly a pleasure to read this!
Reviewed by Richard King 11/13/2011
"..As the last drops From her bottle Pour across our universe Of love." Time to open another,,,, and then another, Dayvid. Can't stop there. Eternity awaits. Dick

Reviewed by Laura Fall 11/12/2011
Truly a romantic write well done so passionate indeed Laura
Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater 11/12/2011
Metaphors splashed across your face, Dayvid! Morning Love gets us to lunch. Encore!

Love and Mennonite menu,
Reviewed by D. Vegas 11/12/2011
Dayvid, WoW, hypnotic, with tones of erotic interlude---

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