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| Reviewed by Dark Knight |
11/29/2012 |
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| wow-I feel like a Voyeur here-ahem-very passionate |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
12/10/2011 |
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| Gotta love a DUI between the sheets, not to mention traffic school would be a pleasure. Patrick |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
11/20/2011 |
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This reminds me of last weekend when I visited my love who is away on a work assignment for two months. Love what you've expressed via your verses here, Dayvid. Love and peace,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
11/14/2011 |
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| so beautifully romantic! |
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| Reviewed by Jeff Neuman-Lee (Reader) |
11/13/2011 |
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| Very nice, very beautiful. |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner |
11/13/2011 |
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| Intoxication at it's best. |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
11/13/2011 |
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Your words contain a potent mixture of love and intoxication...truly a pleasure to read this!
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| Reviewed by Richard King |
11/13/2011 |
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"..As the last drops From her bottle Pour across our universe Of love." Time to open another,,,, and then another, Dayvid. Can't stop there. Eternity awaits. Dick
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| Reviewed by Laura Fall |
11/12/2011 |
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Truly a romantic write well done so passionate indeed Laura
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| Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater |
11/12/2011 |
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Metaphors splashed across your face, Dayvid! Morning Love gets us to lunch. Encore!
Love and Mennonite menu,
Sage |
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| Reviewed by D. Vaineo |
11/12/2011 |
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Dayvid, WoW, hypnotic, with tones of erotic interlude---
Excellent!!
Always,
Deborah |
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