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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
12/14/2004 |
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Hey Mariah...Birthday coming up soon and then....Christmas and you going back to New York.
I think this poem is a superb and animated visual of just how cold and lonely New York can be but you add the warmth of a full heart to it to give it more depth.
Love,
Mom |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
12/14/2004 |
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| Love this one. There is just enough mystery, coupled with romance and lust that make it deliciously sinful. Besides, you brought back memories of New York to me. Just loved the contrast of the frosty finger vs the warmth of breath. Good. |
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