by Marco Landi
Friday, August 08, 2003
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More I scrutinize less I see inside
this we can say of whom want
discover the maze of the heart.
The reason is not really in the dark
it's that our feeling originate
not inside us but the fruitful part
of contacts and impressions
received from outside forces,
and naturally the inside constantly
tend to alter...
A hatred sentiment in love can change;
after conscious or unconscious
A desire can change into repulsion
depending on the agent that place value
Our soul, is influenced by the outside
o react, o eliminate or patiently
suspends the judgement to better time
Temporizer then incoherent, uncertaint
it's own doing may appear to whom
superficially is use to judge by appearance.
Only the impulsive do not reflect on
falls into chaos to find himself, in spite,
forced to agree e to have had the wrong
Our intimate forces with the outside
are in constant fight to maintain the
so gradually the soul evolve and the
soave light shining through the obscure
Locking of certain stimulous our soul
in a dark infertile emptyness that only
contact with real life awaken.
Scrutinize then in the human heart
is a task impossible to complete
without the knowledge of the exterior factor
that likely disturb us.
Marco Landi Copiright 2003
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|Reviewed by Micha Julian
|Marco, yes, the heart is so mysterious, in many ways...I love how you delve within to bring us the honesty of emotion that you do, si! oh, would love to see a poem of yours in Italian w/a Translation...
this, the heart, oh yes...sometimes when 'awakened' and fed on kindness and love, it does make a difference, at others, well.. you've spoekn it here, so deeply honest...thank you.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|You always stir deep thought, and passions Marco, wonderful poetry!|
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|Marco this was a EXCELLANT free verse ride, very much enjoyed!
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|The human heart is a part of the network of consciousness and unsonsciousness. It allows the mystery of love to either vegetate or to bloom. It keeps us agog at the mastermind behind our birth and the reasons we have to love. I allow my senses to reign when others close theirs off in fear. This is not healthy and stunts the growth of love and passion. I love the maze of a heart. It is the most fascinating universe in my world. The mind is a part but is more constructively focused when the heart heals with dreams sometimes. I love your heart and mind marco. It is beautifully awondering.
|Reviewed by Gaye Dale (Reader)
|Marco, I enjoyed this, thank you! It is true that like porcelain we are moulded by the outside forces and influences in our lives, but what shape remains is also dependent on what we are made of inside and how we responded to those influences...|
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Marcho this free flowing verse takes you on quite a journey to your mental underworld. Hope it gave you the release you sought ... it did me. Bill|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Very thoughtful work. Bravo.|