|Reviewed by Micha Julian
|Painful, eloquent, yet very, very Painful...hope, hope is all so needed, especially when the stagnation hits one and the depth of...what You are so roght, Marco, what was Not meant to be in life...
one can feel the pain through these words...
hope must be w/in this Poet, as he wrote for us...yes?
|Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington
|Looks deep inside the lonliness one feels... the loss of hope. Exceptional!
|Reviewed by Ashraf Goreja
|A nice poem.
Greetings from Atlanta.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|I can relate to this one Marco!!
Very well writen piece!!
|Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)
|Marco, this poetry has truth and strength, your verses have sharp and jagged edges! This is a write reflective of a dark mood, but it is also a mirror in which we can see the perspective of the image looking back. Really well-written, nice work!|
|Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
|Very good description of a parralel dungeon I sometimes visit, but I would hate to stay there forever. Remember, life thrives on cycles, there is an opposite to now that will come in the future. The tough part is riding it out until it does. :) Here's a smile for you, Marco... Btw, love the last line, delivers the punch.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Marco my dear, negativity is the door to failure. A dark mood is good only if it leads to enlightenment;-)Excellent write!
|Reviewed by Donna Caristia (Reader)
|"The absence of hope is the real tragedy", you may be right......but someone once told me we should NEVER GIVE UP on HOPE or LIFE for that matter ........ Donna|
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|This is genuis in pain Honey....and i love your poetry.