(I was watching TV, I'm simply saying what the woman I saw could not say. For all the other women who become weak, here is your strength too.
I give you my heart, I give you my body
I give you my mind, when we got married,
I gave you kids, all that I love and cherish
Most dear to me, I left behind for you,
All that I ask of you,
Is that you never Lie to me?
You never cheat on me,
You never creep with family members,
You never creep with my friends,
But after years of getting to know you
The time is here, the time is now
I'm telling you we are through,
You have lied to me for the last time,
You have deceived me and betrayed me,
My heart say's you're a liar,
Remember where you came from
Well, you're going back,
I hope you like the Eastside,
Cause your tired butt, is Whack,
There's no coming back.
Linda Bbs Smith
Copyright ©2003 Linda Bbs Smith
Razors Edge Entertainment
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|Reviewed by Shari M Anderson
|I think whether we settle for it or not makes no difference. Since the Apple, Man has taken the attitude of superiority, and even if we send them packing, you can bet your sweet butt cheeks, there will be another to take his place.Nothing will ever change for the woman, we were charged with it at the fall, but men are weak, and because of this weakness, ( the Rib ) US, they will protect themselves to the bitter end if necessary.
When my Husband verbally abuses me, i think of it this way, hey, idiot your abusing your own rib cage. I told him once, the look on his face was priceless. Read my latest Poem, Without Each other your nothing.
You'll get there, it will come to you one day. Human imperfect nature isnt capable of anything else, dont take it personally, thats the secret to rising above!!
Aside from all that, expressive write, its always good to get the pain out through writng.
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|It's always been amazing to me how women are willing to settle for so little in personal relationships. A thoughtful work.|