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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
3/1/2003 |
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Oh what an imagination! I can see the imageries in my head -
A convict filled with dirt trying to escape.
Hhhhhmmmmm.....the ending.....could be two ways for this mini movie -
(1) The convict, being by the gators, let out a horrific scream.
(2) He only let out the horrific scream to let them think that he's got eaten by the gators.
Whicheverway it was, he never had to go back to the prison. If he made the 2nd choice, then it's time for him to get new identities, and.....
Aaaahhhhh!!!!!.....I'll let you carry on the story.
Sandie Angel ;o) |
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| Reviewed by Linda Hill |
3/1/2003 |
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Wow my sweet friend..
What an imagination
you have!!! I feel its
a convict who escaped from
prison and the guards tried
to recapture, but couldn't.
My question here: Did the
gators get him? Poor man.
Great write, yet again, my friend:) |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
3/1/2003 |
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???????? iwill review you as soon as I get the anwer to this one...:)
Love
Tinka |
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| Reviewed by na na (Reader) |
3/1/2003 |
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Very suspenseful and well written. I can hear and picture crunch, crunch, crunch as
the gators devour the poor soul. Bill |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
3/1/2003 |
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| good write! never mess with a gator! i have seen 'em in louisiana; but thank god, not close! love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :) |
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| Reviewed by Birdie Houston |
3/1/2003 |
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| Phantom where did he go ? What happened ? Is he dead ? Good write !!! |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
3/1/2003 |
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Wow! This was great...liked the ending!
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy |
3/1/2003 |
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| Boom! this one explodes. Chomp, Chomp, Chomp! there are so many possibilities open to this. Drug deal, convict, slave, mafia hit, etc. Good Job. |
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| Reviewed by Marilyn Seray |
3/1/2003 |
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| I'm with Erica...POW's is the first thing that came to mind. Or a drug deal gone bad? Very thrilling and full of suspense. |
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| Reviewed by Oisín Breen |
3/1/2003 |
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good use of dialogue
more prose than poetry
good |
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| Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen |
3/1/2003 |
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| Enjoyed the suspense, cringed at my imagination, Chad! :) |
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| Reviewed by Erica Ivory |
3/1/2003 |
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| Humm.. wanted it to be a mystery..i say it is a POW.. but I am not the writer you are... Hope he got away.. Very good write.. Loved the way you left me hanging.. Now don't do it again..LOL>>LOL |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
3/1/2003 |
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| Oh Chad is it an escaped slave? This had a lot of tension and excitement. |
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| Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) |
3/1/2003 |
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| Hey this is unusual C....is this about an escaping convict? gosh this could mean so many things...are you going to tell us. Hahaha..good write...Floria |
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| Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) |
3/1/2003 |
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Good write, I have witnessed those Gators in action, grabbed a dog right off the dock.
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