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To the unknown friend
by the phantom pheonix

Tuesday, May 20, 2003

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I get the picture I wont leave obviously y mother and my real family are wrong about my poetry and it is really liked so will continuing to post it for you. But there is one thing I ask who is Guardian Angel for they posted a very cruel comment last night about me on my post last night and I am really consider leaving becuase of it.

Angel unseen
Deserving wings
Of gold
Heart full of love
Needing a temple
To be built around it
A soul filled
With kindness
Needing to be
Recognized
But alas
You escape
My attention
Like smoke
On the wind
Like a name
On my lips
That won't speak
All I can manage
Is a simple
Honest
Thank you
For being
You
And my friend.


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Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 5/20/2003
(((chad))) KEEP WRITING please stay (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 5/20/2003
Good. You would be missed.
Reviewed by Marilyn Seray 5/20/2003
Hi Chad,

Please dont leave you have AD behind you for support. Like everyone else has said, your poetry is great, and it would be a shame to deny us (selfish arent I?)of your beautiful words
Marilyn (LW)
Reviewed by E T Waldron 5/20/2003
just stay, write, delete, and share with us as we care enough to make you forget the ones who don't! Okay Chad;-)!!!
Reviewed by Christine Morell 5/20/2003
Keep writing Chad and stay here among your friends.
Chrissie :)
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 5/20/2003
beautiful tribute to your friend, and so glad you aren't leaving! that is great news! as for the slimeball who ripped up your poetry, they don't know real talent, and they are just jealous. don't let their negativity bring you down; you have had too much of it in your life; and you are much better than that! i will be praying for you, chad. love you, guy! your friend in texas, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)
Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader) 5/20/2003
Chad..
Just write hun.. Hold your chin up sweetie.. and write. Knowing that the Den family here are so glad you are staying. Let the negatives just slide off your back. The positives far outshine the negatives in every way. They have no power over you other than the power you allow them to have. (smile) So just smile and move on and poof, any power they might have thought they had has simply vanished in the brilliance of your smile.

Love ya kiddo.. Keep up the great work!
Melanie
Reviewed by Jack Roberts 5/20/2003
I'm glad you are staying.
Jack
Reviewed by Paul Berube 5/20/2003
P.P. We all have our rough times my friend and I am so glad you decided to stay. Life and friendships are wonderful. We go on and hold forgiveness in our hearts and hold no malice towards anyone. Be Blessed and share your blessings with your AD Family.
Reviewed by Kay P Devenish 5/20/2003
Dear Pheonix,
Hi there,
I just saw this one and had to read it,I am so glad you are not giving up on your poems and writing for us all here.
I know it isn't easy but it is best to ignore to cruel comments ,there is always going to be someone who will disagree that 'it's beaut work'...ignore those ones...they are just out to upset you,don't let them.I love your work...keep it up.
Best wishes always
from
your fan,
Kay.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 5/20/2003
Chad,

It is obviously someone who is a devil in the image of hidden garment It wasnt Sandie she would never do this but I feel it is an envious onlooker at the most and they envey your friends ships.. They have the button but you have the pen and It is you that is control now my friend so Never mind and hit delete dont let it take a second thought and Yes our family by birth are always the last to find and admit we are good!!!!!! So write write my friend and grow and grow.
Love n hugs Peggy
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 5/20/2003
I am so glad you decided to stay! Your poetry is excellent my friend, never give in to those who try to stop you!

Reindeer
Reviewed by Tony Nerone 5/20/2003
Just keep on writing Chad.

tony
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 5/20/2003
Great tribute for ure friend...BHUWAN
Reviewed by Linda Hill 5/20/2003
Beautiful poem my sweet
friend. Let nothing stop
you from writing...your
talent will never die...
We all love you Chad...
STAY

~~Linda~~
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 5/20/2003
This is just another way to slant anyone. I had made a post of regarding Guardian Angel, and then all of a sudden, all this is going on. Please Chad, I hope you don't think it was me, FOR IT WASN'T ME!!!!!!

If anyone wants to do anything and blame it on me and please at least state your real name. I have enough problems at home, I don't need this.

I'm certain that my hubby won't do it either. He's not the kind of person who would do a thing like this.

Please Chad and everyone, if you need I can resign and go somewhere else to some other boards, but I certainly don't need anyone to think like this of me.

I am not the "Guardian Angel" who has done this.

If somebody needs me to be away from here, just say so. Don't do this and blame it on me.

Sandie Angel :o(
Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers 5/20/2003
Phantom,,,I really don't think Angel was the word they should have chosen to be their name. You are right, they were cruel, and because of those like them, those like us should push forward and write and post even more than ever. Don't let them win! If you leave they will win. They don't deserve such gratifying satisfaction,,,Lisa
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) 5/20/2003
Everybody is always wrong when they tell you that you can't do something.
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 5/20/2003
Wonderful tribute to your friend. Never let others create doubt in your abilities no matter who they are. Keep writing!
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