|Reviewed by Shay White
|I can almost hear the music! Love it!|
|Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
|Yes, you've done it again. You've magically thrown all the best beach experiences into a blender, spilled them on to a page and gifted all your readers with a sense of aw and grace. Miss you. J'nia|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
|Such a beautiful concert, Gene. I truly could feel the atmosphere and hear the "music". Lovely piece! ~Hugs, Elizabeth|
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|Conducted flawlessly, not one clinker amongst words, music and imagery. Patrick|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Sounds like my kind of live, outdoor event, Gene! So vividly captured and makes me think slightly of The Sorceror's Apprentice: must be those Mickey Mouse gloves and musical animation! :)) Just leaves me to add the pitty-patt of rain marking the applause... Fabulous! xx|
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Oh my ..so beautiful sweet man just like you.... sighhh...Hugss...stay safe and well ..Hugss
|Reviewed by jude forese
|your poem flows effortlessly, capturing the ambiance and music of its scenery ...|
|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|Maestro! The three B's are surely jealous of this etude my dear friend. Your quill a baton of immense ability. Jealous I am. But more than that, grateful to be able to enjoy your song of love for things natural. I bid you love and peace. Jon Michael|
|Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|Outstanding writing, Gene.
|Reviewed by Axilea MU
|Very nice! It feels so real! Summer magic...
|Reviewed by Charles Neff
About the same time, I played three straight days at a beer festival near the Space Needle. The music, for those of us who heard it, was actually good. The the real symphony, in contrast to your tranquil one, was played out by the increasingly raucous crowd.
S here's my BIERFEST
No one following
Horns try to compete
Failed sound sytem
Hiss, crackle, blatt
Cancelling the beat
Time lapses between
"You can't quit now!"
Just for the fun of it. And it actually was.
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|A FINE PAINTING...WITH 'CLIPPED' PHRASES AND VIVID IMAGERY. WONDERFUL! GOD BLESS AND THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE & FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|A satisfying flow of imagery, gene, that morphs into a nice whole ... r|
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|You cherry pick your images and words
to perfection, Gene, and the result
is a special music indeed.
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Beautiful in both a real and ethereal sense, Gene.
The magic of this poem lilts upon my reading it.
|Reviewed by Chessly Nesci
|Beautiful images Gene! I felt as though I there...Chessly|
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|you can hear the sounds carry on the water. ~ Morgan|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|...those damn horns & reeds always trying to compete with Natures gulls...;-) ed|
|Reviewed by David Hightower
|Gene - Thanks for allowing me to feel the coolness of a night on the beach on this hot day in Georgia. Love the simplicity of the images. Especially liked the sound of:
all eyes following
the white glove
horns and reeds compete
and the ending,
Good one. - David
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Oh yes indeed a beach concert. Fantastic write Gene.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by Joy Hale
|Bravo! This example is poetry at it's best. The images you present in words are captivating and highly visual.
Joy L. Hale
|Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
|perfect poetry gene....master of the 7 seas i should say!!!!!!!!|
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Lovely! The imagery is captivating.....
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Enjoyed the nuance of the write|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Great! Especially liked, "horns and reeds compete / with gulls"
Picture is painted and I'm watching . . .
|Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
|Absolutely loved this.. its simplicity is brilliant!|