|Reviewed by Shay White
|I love the wit (and wisdom) in this one! Thanks for sharing!|
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|So true, perhaps of a one night stand
But your poetry is certainly not....
and so deserving of singing in the rain
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Stay sober next time Darlin Gene!! Humor much enjoyed.|
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|Too much of a good thing makes it hard to remember just how good things can be. Excellent piece of writing.|
|Reviewed by Michelle Mead
|Excellent, but that's what I expect reading you, Gene, you are an excellent writer, my friend :)|
|Reviewed by JMS Bell
|WELL DONE..THE REPETITIVE LINES WORK GREAT. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH....JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|Sluggish mis-firing synaptic activity, a strange rash bubbling on mr. peewoden, sounds like too much bad scotch leading you astray. Can't say i relate - never happened to me. (-:
Forced to chuckle gene ...
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Thanks for sharing this gem,Gene,reminds me of some of the songs I heard when I had my restaurant and bar.;-)
|Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis
|I agree with Axilea, and I love it ~|
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|I'll bet she wasn't as pretty in the morning either...giggle....
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Maybe he was with the wrong person Gene, LOL.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by Axilea MU
|Fun and intelligent, Gene, I recognize your personal touch.
|Reviewed by Lloyd Lofthouse
|I remember those days back when I tied one on the night before the morning after. Excellent. So true and of course that laughter he hears tells us that whatever he was good at probably wasn't what he wanted to be good at.
This reminded me of the joke of the ninety year old man that marries a twenty something and everytime he visits her bedroom on the wedding night he forgets that he already was there a dozen times before.
To him, since he easily forgets, each time is the first time.
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Well darlin I know for a fact your number one in my books and you always will be...sighhhhh....wana dance baby? sighhhh....Hugsss...and more Hugsss..
Chanti xoxoxo...always be you darlin.....ALWAYS
|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|I don't know how good you were last night Gene. But I do know how good you were when you wrote this song. A maestro! The tryst and the wine are strictly between the two of you. The next time you awake "hating the sunlight, and the sound of laughter". Pick up your pen and compose another masterpiece to share with us. I bid you love and peace my dear friend. Jon Michael|
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|NICE!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Why? Cause you were a lush last night...;-) but still so good you were...e|
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|And an excellent writing with an outstanding rhyme.
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|Deft, tongue-in-cheek, lyrical and witty,
all the good things good lyrics have.
i love this song, Gene.
|Reviewed by Joy Hale
|An absolutely tittilating lyric! Me thinks this lad had quite the hangover! You gave me a good laugh, Gene. Delightful read.
Joy L. Hale
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
|too much rum perhaps, noise of laughter, noise of anything is like someone driving a sharp spike into your ear-drum? i take a drink, the drink takes a drink and the drink takes me....kind of like love....of bottles and sultry sea-maidens....great writing gene.|
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|So funny, your lyrics lighten us up, Gene!
...and I'm so glad to appreciate this the day before tomorrow :)
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|My reply when she said, "I was so good last night," would, and have been in the past, I'm glad I was because I'm dying today.
You said, "An old song lyric, first verse." I'm assuming it was written by you..