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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo |
5/22/2009 |
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| What a cowardly way to end a relationship and how well you captured the emotions within this short, but effective, poem. Emotive and it can not help but touch the heart and soul. Hugs, Elizabeth |
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| Reviewed by GARY FERRIS, JR |
4/21/2009 |
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Quite a little painful surprise huh. Very nicely done Bear.
Gary |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
4/8/2009 |
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| very powerful in the emotions brought forth with this offering |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
4/8/2009 |
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Carolyn,
This is a gem, even if and because it's full of pain and loss. Fine fine writing.
John |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
4/8/2009 |
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Bear, this is a superbly composed poem that makes me feel the pain.
What a horrible way to say goodbye. -gene.
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
4/8/2009 |
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Ouch, how that must have hurt but you express it beautifully and clearly....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by J'nia Fowler |
4/8/2009 |
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| Extremely touching. I once took all of my beautiful wedding photos and systematically put them through the shredder. Felt good and felt right. Still does. Love and hugs, J'nia |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
4/8/2009 |
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Heartbreaking write, Bear; powerfully penned! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(
Striking piccy! |
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| Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER |
4/8/2009 |
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A broken frame, glass sharts, scratched picture, tears, and a broken heart, she should buy a little coffin and bury the sucker, next...
I was a happy guy till I read this, it sure is heartgripping.
Bless you little Bear! Hugs! Jasmin Horst |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
4/8/2009 |
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| She'll hurt emotionally for awhile but over it she will get & heal will she do...E |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
4/8/2009 |
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Oh, this hurts, Bear - deeply - better a picture than her, as Georg (below) said - effectively penned sadness. Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :( |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
4/8/2009 |
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Better a broken picture than a broken girl from vilonce.
I will say...good riddance! But for the pain...Oh the pain...
Georg
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