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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
5/19/2009 |
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Carolyn,
I like how your word choices paint different shades of white/light. They made me think of a pearl, so by the time I got to the last line, the tears were pearl shaped in my mind. A lovely write. Hugs,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by John Martin |
4/22/2009 |
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| What a wonderful word brush you paint with Bear Paw. The images are captivating and dazzling. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
4/22/2009 |
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Thank you for sharing this gem of a write, Carolyn. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by J'nia Fowler |
4/17/2009 |
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| A few exceptionally well chosen words hit the mark and leave an imprint on my heart. Bless you, J'nia |
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| Reviewed by Darrell and Kathy Adams |
4/17/2009 |
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| I rarely see such grace in poetry, what a treat. Thank you. Be well, Kathy |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
4/17/2009 |
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Flower, thoughts, tears...and a hand putting all together so we can comprehend what was missing.
Georg
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| Reviewed by L. Figgins |
4/16/2009 |
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| Pure Beauty! |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
4/16/2009 |
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| beautiful tanka, Paw ... |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
4/16/2009 |
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| beautiful! |
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| Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath |
4/16/2009 |
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Wonderfully breathtaking along with graphic.
Take care,
Gwendolyn
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
4/16/2009 |
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| Beautiful choice of words, Bear. I love the form of course and agree with Karla's perfection. =gene. |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
4/16/2009 |
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Carolyn,
Striking images and very emotive and evocative.
John |
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| Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary |
4/16/2009 |
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| Lovely Tanka! |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
4/16/2009 |
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Such strong emotions revealed in this wonderful piece...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
4/16/2009 |
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| like precious pearl drops. I love the images you imprint upon my mind and emotions here, Bear. Thank you. Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
4/16/2009 |
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The perfection of this Tanka is in direct proportion to the perfection of the flower of which you write. Well done Carolyn.
hugs
Fee |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
4/16/2009 |
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Stunning composition and image, Bear, well done. No, better than that: PERFECT.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
4/16/2009 |
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Simply beautiful...
Cryssa |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
4/16/2009 |
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| Beautiful and emanating from a fertile mind. |
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| Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER |
4/16/2009 |
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| most deep! |
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