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| Reviewed by ~ H (Reader) |
7/13/2009 |
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| A truly awesome write, flows along beautifully, blessings & peace, Holly |
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| Reviewed by Richard Orey |
6/13/2009 |
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I wonder if I will remember your other poems, you know, the one over there and the one over here?
Oh, yes, indeed!
Very nicely done.
Richard |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
6/8/2009 |
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In my humble opinion, ya done good. I love the way that you personified the stars; your whole perspective presented via your verses. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem * |
6/5/2009 |
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| I too, wonder about the skies, stars, moon and sun. If the sun burns out the stars won't shine, great verse to ponder the why, cheers |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
6/3/2009 |
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| I wonder too, great pen, Bear! |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
6/3/2009 |
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| Love the playfulness of this, Carolyn, with the repetitions! Fabulous sleepy-head ramblings that, as they tend to be, are more acute and philosophically sharp then we usually give them credit for. Sounds to me like you're trying to count them, like sheep. Very engaging and I very much like the confidence with your form. Comforting and comfortable write - sleep well! :)) xx |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace |
6/3/2009 |
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| Ditto...Beautiful writing sweet lady..keep smiling always...Hugss |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
6/2/2009 |
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An enchanting beauty of a poem, Bear,
and I wonder the same things;-)
Love this!...ET |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Wilson |
6/2/2009 |
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| I love the softness and reflection in this. Very original. Wonderful metaphors....goes into my library. |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
6/1/2009 |
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The sparkling was their communication
From that one there
to That one here.......
Outstanding write Carolyn
Love & peace be with you
William
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
6/1/2009 |
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The stars have a language - we can listen, but not comprehend
The stars can see each other - so they can dance in pairs
The sparkle is for you - embrace it and wonder no more.
Lovely, gentle poem Bear. Patrick
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
6/1/2009 |
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| so much mystery still exists-it keeps some of the magic of life alive! |
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| Reviewed by Stan Law |
6/1/2009 |
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And a man stand upon a star, looks down at us, and wonders...
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
6/1/2009 |
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Excellent exploration of mind and universe, Bear. I like this.
-gene. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
6/1/2009 |
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Wow this is one of the nicest offerings of yours that I have read...I love the soft dreamy reflective thoughts that lay in your star gazing eyes. Just soft and mellow...
hugs
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
6/1/2009 |
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Star gazing, dreaming and pondering is a wonderful past time. Has a way of conjuring up many thoughts and images, well said...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
6/1/2009 |
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Carolyn,
Reverie and excellent imagination, and a unique take. Love this.
John |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
6/1/2009 |
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Twinkle, twinkle, little star, how I wonder what you are? Now I know.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone |
6/1/2009 |
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| Great pen, this was a treat. LadyJ |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge |
6/1/2009 |
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| Just so beautiful, such a wonderful metaphor. I wonder too. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
6/1/2009 |
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Wonderful write, Bear; I love it! Well done; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Regino Gonzales, Jr. |
6/1/2009 |
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The feeling of being at peace with the universe shines through the lines. Splendid Bear.
Sincerely,
Regino
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
6/1/2009 |
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| And now, you've got me wondering, too. |
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| Reviewed by Paul D Berube |
6/1/2009 |
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| Brilliant ! |
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| Reviewed by J'nia Fowler |
6/1/2009 |
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| Gentle and searching. I like this. The Bible says that the stars sing. With the proper equipment you can hear some of them sing, all sing a different tune and it is so amazing to experience this. Maybe they do know and try to outshine one another too. Lovely, J'nia |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
6/1/2009 |
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Such a beautiful write with comforting images in the longing - star-speak is GORGEOUS! Well done, Bear.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER |
6/1/2009 |
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| You have reached deep, for you have communicated with them in this beautiful star struck poem , you have become one with them and they with each other at the moment your thoughts reach them, one in communication, but one in unison we are always anyway aren't we, there is no seperateness in the universe. I love this poem, for it is gentle of thought and beauty. Hugs! Jasmin Horst |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
6/1/2009 |
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It just came to me! the stars communicate with a kind of light Morse!
Georg
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