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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
11/28/2006 |
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| Wow, i really love your poems-thanks |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
9/19/2006 |
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| Powerful and soul provoking . The enigma of self remains uncertain..M |
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| Reviewed by J M |
1/4/2006 |
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| Powerful ending this one makes the soul very thought provoking as a subject well done. |
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| Reviewed by Birdie Houston |
1/2/2005 |
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| A fine masterpiece great job! |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem * |
12/17/2004 |
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| hello Carolyn, happy holidays to you. Hope you're doing ok. This was really touching to read. I'm at such a point now. l&p G |
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| Reviewed by . ShyPoet1 |
12/3/2004 |
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Very deep truth!
Well done! |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg |
11/24/2004 |
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Bear this is beautiful Miss you friend.
I am leaving AD for good. Debs has been gone.
Please visit we have a site
The Freedom of Speech
http://www.thefreedomofspeech.com/index.html
LIL bear send his love and prayers.
Ladye Peg
Happy Holidays
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| Reviewed by Anthony Hall |
7/14/2004 |
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sometimes it takes stripping the soul bare of pride, selfishness and even love, that we may then see who and what we really are..
enjoyed this vry much.
Anthony |
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| Reviewed by Ian Thorpe |
6/24/2004 |
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I know too well what you are talking about Carolyn. But when we are stripped of everything, even our dignity, its surprising what we find when we look deeply into ourselves.
Ian |
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| Reviewed by Jim Dunlap |
5/22/2004 |
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| Well, you certainly nailed that one. Good job. |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Smolen |
5/17/2004 |
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This is an excellent poem, it makes these times in my life bubble up and remind me, well done!
Brightest Blessings~Michelle |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
5/17/2004 |
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| Fantastic! Encore! Encore!! |
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| Reviewed by Theresa Koch |
4/17/2004 |
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| Exceptionally done! |
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| Reviewed by E. Richardson |
4/6/2004 |
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| outstanding! that is all I can say. |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen |
3/25/2004 |
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this was a really good poem, evoked a lot of emotion... Keep up the great work and we miss you...
God Bless
~Michelle~ |
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| Reviewed by Marco Landi |
3/19/2004 |
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was a pleasure reading So Far Removed
the magical moment we all need to really look into our soul and discover ourself....Brava |
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| Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed |
2/29/2004 |
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The strength of inner reflection can never be replaced.
Beauty in words Carol,
blessin's,
cynth'ya |
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| Reviewed by na na (Reader) |
2/21/2004 |
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| Your poetry and music lights up the stars in the sky! What a rare jewel of love and sentiment you are. Of course when poetry is great, I cry, and cry and cry. Missed your poetry so much. Bill |
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| Reviewed by Robert Sheridan |
2/9/2004 |
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| 'The truth be known'- this is an exceptional poem! |
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| Reviewed by Vesna TwinFlameunion |
1/25/2004 |
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..indeed THIS IS TRUTH!!!
You have indeed presented that which simmers within all..that fact that when you come down to it..YOU ..and YOU alone can "fix" it all..then begin to fathom the whys and wherefores..brilliant ..just brilliant..TY Bear!!
Vesna *smile* |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
1/21/2004 |
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| There are poets…and there are real poets like you…keep on shining…I admire your work…love n luck….BHUWAN |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
1/21/2004 |
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| Music, lyrics and image complement one another to express this beautiful creation perfectly. Love and peace to you, Carolyn. Regis |
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| Reviewed by Marilyn Seray |
1/20/2004 |
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| So nice to read you again. Hope you are well. I kow this poem is |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
1/20/2004 |
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This was so beautiful, so very lovely, just outstanding! I loved this, and the midi was beautiful,
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader) |
1/20/2004 |
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| Not seena new write from you for ages Carolyn. Welcome back with this wonderful write |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
1/19/2004 |
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Welcome back Bear! You've been missed, so glad you're back!This poem is outstanding! Exquisite verses with a truly magnificent finale!Kudo
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
1/19/2004 |
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| This is exquisite Carolyn, just beautiful. |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
1/19/2004 |
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| Georgous write, had to stay on to listen to REM, and sing along...)) |
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| Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii) |
1/19/2004 |
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| So excellent Carolyn and so well written. I fell this so personally as I stand here in console with my soul.Peace and blessings. |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
1/19/2004 |
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"So Far Removed"... Composed with sage words from the lexicon of the wise... True poemization of emotions from imagination that traveled through the nine seas of questions making stops in twelve planets in eternal wondering of creation to land on the ground of reality with a decision to remove the skin like a snake and allow a new one to grow...
"So Far Removed" is a masterpiece of poetical best.
I Salute You, Author Poet Carolyn Red Bear.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
1/19/2004 |
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(((bear)))
(((gentle hugs))) it's so good to see you back where you belong
this is one of the best poems i've seen you write--absolutely brilliant
love,
karla.
WELCOME BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
1/19/2004 |
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Truly beautiful Carolyn!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Lee Garrett |
1/19/2004 |
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| This is one of the best poems I've seen in a long time. Very impressive and very true. |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Jones (Reader) |
1/19/2004 |
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What beautiful talent you have Carolyn! Your words brought tears to my eyes.
"It's when
there is
nothing left to
get a grip on
to reach for or
to hold on to
so far removed from a
point of reference
leaving you
comfortably numb
in forced nothingness.
It is then
stripped bare
standing soul-naked to
the universe that both
gives and takes
that you are brought
to your self
to console with
your own soul
and find out
who you
really
are."
Stunning poetry!
I hope you are feeling better...
Love, Sheila
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| Reviewed by Christine Morell |
1/19/2004 |
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An amazing piece with my favourite REM track to compliment it.
I really enjoyed this Carolyn.
~Chrissie |
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| Reviewed by JoAnne Buchanan (Reader) |
1/19/2004 |
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Sweet light,
did you get my e mails? I sent you a book too at your PO box..Hope all is well, my friend sister..
Love
Dove |
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| Reviewed by Andrea Da Costa (Reader) |
1/19/2004 |
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Wonderful poem and the last verse is so well said and concludes it perfectly. Awesome pic too!
Andrea |
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| Reviewed by Debashish Haar |
1/19/2004 |
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GREAT to see you post..This is a BRILLIANT write, Red Bear..Hope you are recovering well..
Your friend,
Debashish |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
1/19/2004 |
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(((My sweet Bear)))
This is a very wonderful write, my dear! So happy you are back; sorry to hear you were in a car accident! Am hoping you are feeling much better; you have been in my thoughts and prayers! Have missed you!
(((Gentle hugs))) (you are probably still feeling sore) and much love, your Texas friend, Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
1/19/2004 |
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| Beautiful poem, music and pic to complement your write |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
1/19/2004 |
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| Awesome write, Carolyn. And welcome back. Hope you're doing OK. |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
1/19/2004 |
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| Inspirational with deep truths in this incredible write. |
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| Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz |
1/19/2004 |
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You have come to a wondrous conclusion here,
Carolyn. This is a truly in-depth performance!
My favorite line is: "Standing soul-naked to the
universe." Lovely! |
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