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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
7/14/2008 |
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| Birds in flight, so amazing a sight. Creation alights with wisdom from above, only to take us to an unknown land at the end of our days to relish our memories and find our loved ones again. Good expressions in this write, Enjoyed. |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
2/3/2008 |
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Love that last line...
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Charlie |
2/1/2008 |
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| There was a flock of words sitting in my neighbors tree this morning-- just flew down from Canada. They were singing to the new sun, but I didn't catch what they were singing... perhaps a broken poem learned along their migration course from parts unknown. I only know that if I could have, I'd have climbed the tree, and opened my mouth to the mother-- she could feed me long, wriggling words,and then I'd digest them and dream them whole tonight... |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
2/1/2008 |
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| Oh very nice! "word" yes! |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
2/1/2008 |
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Outstanding!!
Love tinka |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
2/1/2008 |
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Brilliant... Other day at Brighton peir the birds went nuts, they looked like a crazy thunder cloud..
Top stuff... |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
2/1/2008 |
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| i like this--word--my teenaged son used "word" as a term of agreement for a long time- |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
2/1/2008 |
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The magic flight of poem - you pen it very well, Queenie.
PS I would never eat the ancient serpent at Mono Lake. I'd like him as a pet, though, to keep away salesmen! |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
2/1/2008 |
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Anita,
Your words are a pure pleasure to read. Your writings never fail to inspire me. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul. |
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| Reviewed by Ted Bossis |
2/1/2008 |
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| Aerated indeed _ under_tone in breath ~ evevollo~TedSo |
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| Reviewed by John Leko |
1/31/2008 |
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...wonderful thoughts...lifted in pen...in wings rhyme...you have given us flight...
very well done...
John |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
1/31/2008 |
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| Beautfiul writing..enjoyed...Hugssss |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
1/31/2008 |
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YOu are such a vibrant poet Anita! Your poetry always soars!
Love,
ET |
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| Reviewed by Staci Gansky-Wagner |
1/31/2008 |
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| Beautiful poem. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
1/31/2008 |
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Oh Anita this song is for the poets in all of us and encompasses so much of who we are and what we do...very nice indeed.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
1/31/2008 |
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BEAUTIFUL inspirational lines, Lady A. You followed its wishes in lovely lines--well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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