If You Can See Me
by A PAX
Monday, June 20, 2011
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If You Can See Me
I have not seen you for a life time!
Actually, I never thought I'd see you again....
How fast can my feet carry me
I am calling you
Can't you see me?
Can't you hear me??
I'm practically right in front of you
Why are your movements so strange
You seem weak
Are you sick
Look this way
Why don't you stop talking to those people!
Hey! It's me!!!
Oh finally! You look my way for one second, then turn away???
Like you are looking right through me....
This is freaky and disturbing....
Your feet don't seem to touch ground.....
You look like a cloud...
Oh this makes me very uncomfortable....
This is frustrating, I will not give up though.....
TALK TO ME..
OK forget it, I am out of here.....
I need to walk
I need to talk to someone....
Hey, I know those people
They cannot hear me
I scream, joke, laugh
It's not just you
No one can hear me
Why am I still talking to you in my head, you ignored me
Looked right through me
You were like fog
Am I fog too?
This is silly..
No it's scary!
How come no one can see me, yet you can talk to those other people
You all see one another, but don't see me
I am alone
It's like you died by those people and I died alone, so I am dead
It cannot be!!!
Why can I see so many people, who cannot see me!!!
What's going on???
Well, you tell me how this ends
If you can see me
June 20, 1011
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Reviewed by Jon Willey 7/31/2011
A Pax, to come to grips with this journey is a ride of emotional fantasy for me. I can see you. Can you see me? There is no end to this my dear friend. It is an eternal journey of human fascination. Me thinks. i bid you love and joy my dear friend. Jon Michael
Reviewed by Gene Williamson 7/1/2011
Hey, I can see you. Guess who.
Reviewed by Sheila Roy 6/25/2011
I can see you. Dang, Anita, I was feeling quite invisible myself. I was actually toying with the theory that I was invisible, so this poem made me laugh, but on the other hand...I know that feeling. Hugs,
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 6/22/2011
Excellent offering...all I can see is that this is spooky...and the delivery date of a ghost....lol!!
Feel ignored myself!!
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 6/21/2011
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 6/20/2011
Wow, you drew me right in, fabulous...
Be always safe,
Reviewed by John Flanagan 6/20/2011
Great delivery, Pax,
the breaks and spaces, the questions...
uncertainty everywhere, reality grip elusive.
Reviewed by A PAX 6/20/2011
Yes, this was a really weird dream!
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 6/20/2011
ICU, UCme. A very strange view of a dream state, I think?
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 6/20/2011
Well I can't see you either but I can read you so in some form or another you must be whole...e