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If You Can See Me
by A PAX
Monday, June 20, 2011
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If You Can See Me



I have not seen you for a life time!
Actually, I never thought I'd see you again....
How fast can my feet carry me
I am calling you

Can't you see me?

Can't you hear me??

I'm practically right in front of you

Hello!!
Hello?

Why are your movements so strange
You seem weak
Are you sick

Hellooooo

Look this way

Hey!

Why don't you stop talking to those people!
Hey! It's me!!!
Hiiiiii
?

Oh finally! You look my way for one second, then turn away???
Like you are looking right through me....
This is freaky and disturbing....

Your feet don't seem to touch ground.....
You look like a cloud...
Oh this makes me very uncomfortable....

HELLOOOOOOOOOO
Focus!!!

This is frustrating, I will not give up though.....

TALK TO ME..
OK forget it, I am out of here.....

I need to walk

I need to talk to someone....

Hey, I know those people

Oh no

They cannot hear me
I scream, joke, laugh

Hey!!!

It's not just you

No one can hear me

Why am I still talking to you in my head, you ignored me
Looked right through me
You were like fog

Am I fog too?

This is silly..
No it's scary!

How come no one can see me, yet you can talk to those other people
You all see one another, but don't see me

I am alone

Why

It's like you died by those people and I died alone, so I am dead
Alone

Creepy thought!

It cannot be!!!

Why can I see so many people, who cannot see me!!!

What's going on???


Nothing, because
Well, you tell me how this ends

If you can see me

Pax

A

June 20, 1011



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Reviewed by Jon Willey
A Pax, to come to grips with this journey is a ride of emotional fantasy for me. I can see you. Can you see me? There is no end to this my dear friend. It is an eternal journey of human fascination. Me thinks. i bid you love and joy my dear friend. Jon Michael
Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Hey, I can see you. Guess who.
Reviewed by Sheila Roy
I can see you. Dang, Anita, I was feeling quite invisible myself. I was actually toying with the theory that I was invisible, so this poem made me laugh, but on the other hand...I know that feeling. Hugs,
Sheila
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Excellent offering...all I can see is that this is spooky...and the delivery date of a ghost....lol!!

Feel ignored myself!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
well delivered!
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Wow, you drew me right in, fabulous...

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by John Flanagan
Great delivery, Pax,
the breaks and spaces, the questions...
uncertainty everywhere, reality grip elusive.
Yes!

John
Reviewed by A PAX
Yes, this was a really weird dream!
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
ICU, UCme. A very strange view of a dream state, I think?

Ron
Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Well I can't see you either but I can read you so in some form or another you must be whole...e
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